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Pumpkin Winds

Pumpkin winds

Your amber-umber eyes, penetrate me
as saffron sun sets on faces, ashen
Your suspicious mind raves with jealousy
as pumpkin winds chill our summers passion

For contest Bite size Line Gautier
September 23,2023

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Charmaine Chircop

March 1, 2024 at 10:13 AM

Passion,jealousy and more.So very sweet

John Hamilton

March 14, 2024 at 7:48 PM

Thanks Charma just catching up with comments!

Richard Lamoureux

October 19, 2023 at 7:53 AM

I see you have another bite size win. Pumpkin adds to the flavour of the write. Congratulations on your win.

John Hamilton

October 19, 2023 at 10:53 AM

Thanks again Rick glad you enjoy these little gems.

Joanna Daniel

October 14, 2023 at 4:29 AM

How did I miss this one, John, lovely... Congratulations:) very well deserved:)

John Hamilton

October 15, 2023 at 1:26 PM

Thanks Jo so nice to have you pass by today it means a lot to me!

Charlotte Puddifoot

October 13, 2023 at 5:05 AM

this is so beautiful..amber-umber eyes, saffron sun, pumpkin winds..sounds like a dream autumn..thank you for visiting and commenting :)

John Hamilton

October 13, 2023 at 7:45 PM

My pleasure Charlotte always a treat to read you. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed this meager offering, songwriting comes more easily to me, so thanks again.

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2023 at 8:33 PM

Back with congrats. Way to go

John Hamilton

October 4, 2023 at 11:06 AM

Thanks Andrea

Alexis Y.

September 30, 2023 at 7:11 PM

Hi John, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful evening;-) Alexis

John Hamilton

October 4, 2023 at 11:06 AM

Thanks Lexi it's nice to have you pass by again I appreciate it!

Susan Ashley

September 30, 2023 at 9:57 AM

Dear John, your Autumn imagery captures the chill of love's dying embers with poetic finesse. I especially admired "saffron sun sets on faces, ashen" - wow! Lots of passion packed into a bite size verse! Congratulations for your excellent win with Line. She's a discerning and accomplished poet and judge! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

John Hamilton

September 30, 2023 at 12:45 PM

Thanks Susan for stopping by with your complimentary words on this simple piece. I'm so pleased you liked it, it means a lot coming from you dear poet.

Krish Radhakrishna

September 29, 2023 at 11:42 AM

Congrats on your win!! Beautiful composition!:)

John Hamilton

September 29, 2023 at 1:11 PM

Thanks Krish I appreciate your support!

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2023 at 1:59 PM

oh I really like this. Hope it gets you a win!

John Hamilton

September 29, 2023 at 1:11 PM

Thanks Andrea nice to "see" you today!

Alexis Y.

September 24, 2023 at 1:02 PM

Hi John, First of all must say I am happy to see you posting again. I have missed your presence in the soup. You have penned a well-written fiery and passionate write. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

John Hamilton

September 24, 2023 at 1:26 PM

Thanks Lexi I've been back for a little while nice to see you pass by with your kind words.

Silent One

September 24, 2023 at 2:23 AM

Great word weaving my friend..

John Hamilton

September 24, 2023 at 12:10 PM

Thanks SO for visiting this humble little ditty.

Karen Jones

September 23, 2023 at 7:23 PM

I love the rhyme and cute way with words I wish this was longer.

John Hamilton

September 24, 2023 at 12:09 PM

Thanks Karen first time visiting I think so welcome to my page. This is an excerpt from another poem which is longer, I'll try to find it if you would like to read it.

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