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Pumpkin Winds

Pumpkin winds Your amber-umber eyes, penetrate me as saffron sun sets on faces, ashen Your suspicious mind raves with jealousy as pumpkin winds chill our summers passion For contest Bite size Line Gautier September 23,2023

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/1/2024 10:13:00 AM

Passion,jealousy and more.So very sweet

John Hamilton
Date: 3/14/2024 7:48:00 PM

Thanks Charma just catching up with comments!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2023 7:53:00 AM

I see you have another bite size win. Pumpkin adds to the flavour of the write. Congratulations on your win.

John Hamilton
Date: 10/19/2023 10:53:00 AM

Thanks again Rick glad you enjoy these little gems.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/14/2023 4:29:00 AM

How did I miss this one, John, lovely... Congratulations:) very well deserved:)

John Hamilton
Date: 10/15/2023 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Jo so nice to have you pass by today it means a lot to me!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/13/2023 5:05:00 AM

this is so beautiful..amber-umber eyes, saffron sun, pumpkin winds..sounds like a dream autumn..thank you for visiting and commenting :)

John Hamilton
Date: 10/13/2023 7:45:00 PM

My pleasure Charlotte always a treat to read you. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed this meager offering, songwriting comes more easily to me, so thanks again.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2023 8:33:00 PM

Back with congrats. Way to go

John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2023 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/30/2023 7:11:00 PM

Hi John, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful evening;-) Alexis

John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2023 11:06:00 AM

Thanks Lexi it's nice to have you pass by again I appreciate it!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/30/2023 9:57:00 AM

Dear John, your Autumn imagery captures the chill of love's dying embers with poetic finesse. I especially admired "saffron sun sets on faces, ashen" - wow! Lots of passion packed into a bite size verse! Congratulations for your excellent win with Line. She's a discerning and accomplished poet and judge! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 9/30/2023 12:45:00 PM

Thanks Susan for stopping by with your complimentary words on this simple piece. I'm so pleased you liked it, it means a lot coming from you dear poet.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 9/29/2023 11:42:00 AM

Congrats on your win!! Beautiful composition!:)

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Krish I appreciate your support!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 1:59:00 PM

oh I really like this. Hope it gets you a win!

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2023 1:11:00 PM

Thanks Andrea nice to "see" you today!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/24/2023 1:02:00 PM

Hi John, First of all must say I am happy to see you posting again. I have missed your presence in the soup. You have penned a well-written fiery and passionate write. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2023 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Lexi I've been back for a little while nice to see you pass by with your kind words.

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2023 2:23:00 AM

Great word weaving my friend..

John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2023 12:10:00 PM

Thanks SO for visiting this humble little ditty.

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 7:23:00 PM

I love the rhyme and cute way with words I wish this was longer.

John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thanks Karen first time visiting I think so welcome to my page. This is an excerpt from another poem which is longer, I'll try to find it if you would like to read it.