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Pumpkin

pumpkin harvest from fields of bounty ~ pregnant moon resting AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on November 5, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2018 6:18:00 PM

I love pumpkin fields. Just my personal opinion , why not add On at the beginning of line 2/

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 6:41:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for the needed nudge. I tweaked this haiku.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/6/2018 5:58:00 PM

Hi Line, once more the imagery sings in the imagination. You have painted another wonderful canvas of a Haiku. Have a wonderful Tuesday. your friend....Mike.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 6:42:00 PM

Thanks, Vladislav, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/6/2018 1:13:00 PM

Stunning image, well-captured, Line. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 3:00:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/6/2018 10:36:00 AM

A beautiful painting you've penned. The instant imagery is bright and quite lovely of a scene.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 3:00:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Chris Green

Date: 11/6/2018 9:01:00 AM

This was a delightful read this morning. So soft and soothing it felt. Beautifully done my friend.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thanks, Chris. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 11/6/2018 8:14:00 AM

I especially like your last line "a full moon rests"... it sounds so peaceful. ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/6/2018 4:32:00 AM

lovely image //// green to yellow, round and round, smiling chubby mouth to the shining sun-----

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 4:42:00 AM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Mahtab.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/5/2018 10:11:00 PM

Oh, I love this fabulous Fall imagery and the feeling that it has, Line. Sensational! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/5/2018 10:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.