Pulse of Sighs

i bathe in your scent
when midnight rips my skin’s hems
then once, twice in flames
a heated pulse of deep craving
finally explodes in sighs

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Love Note for Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Passionate lines penned..Enjoyed reading your unique creativity..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always bring a smile to my face..Sara
Manassian Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 10:57 AM
OH DEAR!!!! Dripping with passion! Classy....not crass! ;) Thanks for the visit, sweetie...you amaze!
Austin Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 9:56 AM
A real fast-breather, nette. Love, daver
Gasun Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 9:13 AM
Hi, my dear friend Nette! How are you? Hope you're doing well & has arrived there safe. I'm stopping by to read this excellently romantic poem of yours. Thumbs up always my dearest friend! Always a winner for me. Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem. I'm so sorry again 'cuz I didn't know we're going to push through with our retreat & I was wishing that I can catch you up after;(((.Hope you'll understand. Big big hugs, to you. Soupmail pls. love lots, Leonora
Undertaker Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 2:01 AM
You spoiled my work.I'm calling my girl. sexy...romantic....very artful...great!
Poet Avatar
June 22, 2013 at 12:24 PM
Wow soo romantic Nette! Love it!
Sathasivam Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 11:39 PM
Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Tacito Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 7:56 AM
This is how all 1st dates should feel like. ;) I kid, sorta. Strong lines, Nette!!!
Sivey Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 9:56 PM
WOW!! That is exactly how I feel after reading this dynamite write, WOW!! This is a wonderful and inviting poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! What a superior poem, a passionate write, Great Work!!
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