Pulse

In the middle In the midst Of this bureaucratic Heart Pumping Paper Ideas The pulse Of this great nation In the middle In the midst Of me

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/31/2018 10:50:00 AM

Lovely, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/31/2018 11:15:00 AM

Thank you for checking it out! :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/20/2017 7:08:00 PM

A great description of a very interesting occupation. Is it the US capital or a state capital? In any case--it's a real action story and makes me feel out of breath. I can feel my legs working on the pedals.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/20/2017 8:17:00 PM

Nope, smaller, colder, and probably hotter with the humid heat, Canada's capital ;)

Mike Hauser

Date: 3/18/2017 9:43:00 AM

So much said in so few words!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/17/2017 9:12:00 PM

A great write Maureen...powerful and straight to the point. Love It!! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/18/2017 8:09:00 AM

Thank you! I'm so glad you do :) xomo!

Choene Alley Semenya

Date: 3/17/2017 7:01:00 AM

Hi Maureen, Wooow i am touched by your writing. Short and simple, yet saying so much. Keep writing ey

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/17/2017 9:02:00 AM

Lovely! Thanks for checking it out :) xomo!

Maria Williams

Date: 3/17/2017 12:40:00 AM

Love it.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/17/2017 6:43:00 AM

Yay! ;) thank you bunches xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2017 3:14:00 PM

- A simple but lovely poem, Maureen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/16/2017 10:13:00 PM

Simply elated Ty! Hugs back ;)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/16/2017 1:21:00 PM

This is a great one Maureen! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/16/2017 10:11:00 PM

Thank you Heidi! Bless :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/16/2017 10:31:00 AM

You aptly shared your passion and heart in just a few short phrases, Maureen! Well done, 7!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/16/2017 10:11:00 PM

Gleefully received and honoured :) Ty Laura xomo!

Mike Hauser

Date: 3/16/2017 10:18:00 AM

Love this!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/16/2017 10:09:00 PM

Thank you so for appreciating this big little piece of me :)