Pulse

The pulse
Rises fast and
Goes suddenly awry
Feeling your heart stops suddenly
The beat










For The One Who Survives
Sponsored by Sara Kendrick
Fifth Place
2-5-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Nayda, congratulations on your placement in survivor contest!!!
Negron Flores Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Eve
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Anytime
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Congratulations on your Cinquain win.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Thank you Joyce
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Nayda, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~
Negron Flores Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Thank you Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Very touchy.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Nayda.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 4:37 AM
Thank you Dr. Sharma
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Yes, when one faces something tragic or really frightening that is exactly what happens..Sara
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Indeed Sara. Thank you for your fine contest.
George   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Many congrats on your win, dear Nayda, with this excellent Cinquain. Elaine
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Elaine
Scars Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Nayda, congrats on your placement!! -luloo *smiles* :)
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Thank you Laura
Onclaud Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:04 PM
visually heart-stopping, nayda.. sweet congrats to you.. huggs
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Nette
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Susan
Lane Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Well done cinquain, Nayda. Congrats.
Negron Flores Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Lin
Malcom Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Great word flow!!!
Negron Flores Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Elijah
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