Puddles and harvest

The rain falls down,
A gentle call,
Water seeks lanes and yards,
Since the rills,and drains,
And local ponds vanished.

On the roads,
Passing cars splash water,
Dirty on paddlers' clothes,
As they leap high
To avoid the mess.
They jump again and again
Through the potholes,
Dodging the distress.

If rain lingers long
Water flows, a streaming throng,
Covering the roads.

Let's bear this all,
For in nature's plan,
Without rain's grace
Rice production would fail .

Cherish each drop,
For in every storm and puddle
Lies promise of harvest.

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Date: 3/9/2025 3:20:00 PM
The poem of yours called 4 legged divinity doed not present a nice for me to comment. Maybe just how my phone is acting. Anyway. I come here to say it was an enjoyable poem. I think some dogs are so special. I had one that was. A long time ago .
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/11/2025 11:18:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 3/7/2025 1:31:00 AM
rain can be a bless, it depends on countries, more deep are your words, thanks
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/8/2025 7:47:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/6/2025 6:19:00 AM
- Rain gives hope to many, Akham - Some need it more than others ... we have rain all year round ... maybe a couple of weeks in the summer we are without ... not fairly distributed - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/6/2025 6:23:00 AM
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Date: 3/4/2025 5:41:00 PM
Interesting information, as you tell it. It reminds me of yin yan. A destructive force has an opposite force that does good. Rice has kept a lot of people alive. I really like your stories. The verses have a favorable meter.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/4/2025 7:44:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:53:00 AM
A lovely portrayal of something I never grew up seeing but it's so cool to get a flavor of the world on your side of it
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/3/2025 7:24:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:44:00 AM
A bit of angst during the wet season, but it is also needed. Enjoyed your write!
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/3/2025 7:24:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:11:00 AM
Its been raining alot here. And now as i read this, i cant help but cherish every drop, and appreciate what rain brings dor us, very well written, profound and powerful poem that conveys an important message too. Pleasure reading this dear Akham, sending you light always
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 3/3/2025 7:24:00 PM
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