PTSD

PTSD

massive explosion
fireball lights up the dark sky
screams for the medic
cries for mother
torn bodies lying at my feet
snap and pop of burning ammo assaults my ears
smell of burnt flesh fresh in my nose
I am frozen in place, I can’t help anyone,
my mouth moves but I can’t speak
I alone am left alive.

I awake in my bed, trembling and sobbing
sweat running in torrents down my body
my hands shaking.
All tell me I am lucky
to be the only survivor.
I am helpless, lost and alone
no one understands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 6/19/2025 7:59:00 PM
Great depiction of PTSD, Oliver. So relevant to our times, what with terrorist attacks and/or war everywhere on this poor, beleaguered planet
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/20/2025 12:43:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. It is.
Date: 1/11/2025 11:13:00 AM
You are not alone in this experience. My uncle was a medic in the war and despite his Purple Heart he too has ptsd but doesn’t share with us his obviously vivid memories. Keep pressing on and I will pray for your deliverance. A great important write that envelopes your experience and brings awareness. Thank you for sharing Oliver.
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2025 2:25:00 PM
Thanks Karen
Date: 1/11/2025 7:33:00 AM
Brutal poetry. Nam? Doesn't matter. All war is hell, even for the victors. You might like my similar themed piece - Kensington Ave
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 1/11/2025 2:27:00 PM
I was in the military at the tail end of Nam but never went there. Knew too many who did and came back haunted. But, yes, all war is this way. Too bad we cant rid of it. I will take a look at Kensington Ave.
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