Psycho

I opened my door To a lunatic A certified psycho Let it into my home O to turn back the clock Erase the blunder And The aftermath That transcends AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 7, 2019

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/8/2019 10:10:00 AM

Ooh, how horrible! This reminds me of an old saying, "Walk softly and carry a big stick!" Well penned.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 10:41:00 AM

Great saying, ML. Thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/8/2019 6:27:00 AM

We all have a psycho somewhere in our family, neighborhood, or background. I am glad you have "opened this door". It may help other poets write the poem they need to write to start healing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Sometimes our "blunder" is just being too naive or too plain nice... therefore unsuspecting and the perfect victim.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 3/7/2019 11:48:00 PM

Interesting, cool!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/8/2019 12:12:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. LOL

Pat Adams

Date: 3/7/2019 7:18:00 PM

Reminds me of one of my old girlfriends. Turned out not to be so friendly. Creepy but cool and well done!....80)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 8:18:00 PM

The scariest psychos are the ones who seem normal...

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 3/7/2019 6:13:00 PM

HELP!!! Don't turn around or your spirit and soul we be gone!!!! Runnnnnnnnnnnnn!!! James

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 6:13:00 PM

For sure, James!

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/7/2019 5:26:00 PM

Must put a sign outside and an extra lock on your door...Good message for all....

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 6:13:00 PM

Do we ever learn ?!!!

W.A. Cholt

Date: 3/7/2019 3:39:00 PM

We all can relate to that feeling of regret. How events take shape and happen sometimes catching us unawares. The painful regret that follows. You've summed it all up.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 4:36:00 PM

When are they going to invent an UNDO button ??

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2019 3:20:00 PM

Scary poem indeed Line and i try to be wary especially of people who hide behind their pc and inflict awful abuse on others especially stalking has happened here and has caused people to leave:-( hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 4:37:00 PM

Absolutely, Jan.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/7/2019 10:28:00 AM

Ouch, that's not good. Worrisome little piece. BG

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/7/2019 11:28:00 AM

Be careful who you let into your sanctuary. Word of advice to all.