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PSYCHEDELIC INVITATION

(Verse 1)
Ping, ping—the echoes land,
I’m tangled in thoughts I can’t command,
Spinning circles on this crowded street,
Chasing shadows I never meet.

The silence hums, a crooked tune,
Words dissolve beneath the moon,
But there’s a whisper, soft and bare,
A secret floating in the air.

(Chorus)
Oh, drop me a comment, make it stick,
Tell me what’s honest, or just a trick.
I’m drifting here, lost in the grey,
Caught in the noise, but I’ll find my way.
Ping, ping—the signal’s near,
A flicker, a spark, or something unclear.

(Verse 2)
Neon trails on crumpled notes,
Lost in the blur where silence floats,
Words slip past like grains of sand,
Trying to catch what slips through my hand.

Ask me the why, or ask me the how,
Why write at all when the moments drown?
Drop me a hint, or open the door,
Tell me if I’m missing something more.

(Chorus)
Oh, drop me a comment, make it stick,
Tell me what’s honest, or just a trick.
I’m drifting here, lost in the grey,
Caught in the noise, but I’ll find my way.
Ping, ping—the signal’s near,
A flicker, a spark, or something unclear.

(Bridge)
Maybe it’s “loosen the reins, let it fall,”
Maybe it’s “don’t fear the empty hall,”
Maybe it’s “keep stepping on,”
Or “find the light when the night feels long.”

Tell me if I’m wrong or right,
Lost among stars in a restless night,
These words drift, they sway, they gleam—
Are they real, or just a dream to dream?

(Chorus)
Oh, drop me a comment, make it stick,
Tell me what’s honest, or just a trick.
I’m drifting here, lost in the grey,
Caught in the noise, but I’ll find my way.
Ping, ping—the signal’s near,
A flicker, a spark, or something unclear.

(Outro)
Drop me a comment, let it fly,
A little voice, a wink, a sigh.
I’ll keep drifting, words colliding,
In this haze, munchies riding.

And if you’re brave enough to share,
We’ll write a song, a moment rare.
Spin the lines, catch the vibe,
Just you and me, alive, alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/1/2025 11:47:00 AM
Hey... you are back... after 6 years??? Hope all is well.. Welcome back.. love the lyrics..
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Date: 6/1/2025 11:02:00 AM
I'm happy to give it a go LM! will get my thinking cap on! hugs jan xx
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