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PSYCHEDELIC INVITATION

(Verse 1) Ding, ding, the echoes come, I’m lost in thoughts that never run, Spinning circles, can’t escape, Chasing lines I can’t relate. The silence hums a steady beat, Can’t hear the words, they’re incomplete, But there's a whisper in the air, A comment drifting everywhere. (Chorus) Oh, drop me a comment, make it real, Tell me what’s true, tell me how you feel, I’m floating here, can’t find my way, Caught in the rush, but I’ll be okay. Ding, ding, the sound is near, A little spark, or something unclear. (Verse 2) Neon lights on paper trails, Lost in the blur, but I’m still sailing, Words are floating, can’t hold on, Just trying to keep the beat in time. Ask me a question, ask me why, What’s the point of writing if I never try? Drop me a clue or show me the door, Let me know if I’m lost, or something more. (Chorus) Oh, drop me a comment, make it real, Tell me what’s true, tell me how you feel, I’m floating here, can’t find my way, Caught in the rush, but I’ll be okay. Ding, ding, the sound is near, A little spark, or something unclear. (Bridge) Maybe it’s "keep it loose, let it slide," Maybe it’s "don’t worry, don’t hide," Maybe it’s "keep moving on," Or "it’s all good, just stay strong." Tell me if I’m wrong or right, If I’m lost in the stars tonight, These words are drifting, floating free, But are they real, or just a dream to see? (Chorus) Oh, drop me a comment, make it real, Tell me what’s true, tell me how you feel, I’m floating here, can’t find my way, Caught in the rush, but I’ll be okay. Ding, ding, the sound is near, A little spark, or something unclear. (Outro) Drop me a comment, let it fly, A little feedback, give it a try, I’ll keep drifting, keep on writing, In this haze, I’ll keep igniting. And next time, if you're feeling bold, Let’s write a song together, let it unfold. We’ll spin the lines and feel the vibe, Just you and me, we’ll bring it alive.

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Date: 6/1/2025 11:47:00 AM
Hey... you are back... after 6 years??? Hope all is well.. Welcome back.. love the lyrics..
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Date: 6/1/2025 11:02:00 AM
I'm happy to give it a go LM! will get my thinking cap on! hugs jan xx
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