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Pseudo Love

How do you define what is “true love”? Is this the person you’re thinking of? She clings like a parasite, during both day and night. She’s someone you want to get rid of. At first, she was as sweet as honey. Now, she’s only after your money. Your ultimate goal is to drop her in a hole. Some place where it isn’t too sunny.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/15/2012 5:23:00 AM
'.......she was as sweet as honey Now,she's only after your money.' I enjoyed it with a smile,Robert.Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:20:00 PM
Sounds more like stalker love to me...;-) Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congrats on your lovely win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/6/2012 3:37:00 PM
too funny, Robert. REally glad this placed in the contest so I could come read it!! Congrats.
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Date: 9/6/2012 11:13:00 AM
My big congratulations, Robert on your big win in Skat's contest, " Define Love ". I love your honesty. Some women are only after the money, and I understand your frustration over untrue love. I have enjoyed reading your Limerick, and I suggest that you drop off this selfish person in a third world country! That's even worse than a dark hole. Thanks for your kind comments. have a wonderful weekend. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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Date: 9/6/2012 8:58:00 AM
congrats Robert on a great win for this fine way of defining love .. luv ..
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert , put the sheath on the knife before you cut some one xx
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:11:00 PM
RObert , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:28:00 PM
Funny limericks, unfortunately true in some cases....excellent write! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:04:00 PM
ROBERT, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Date: 9/3/2012 10:24:00 PM
The only good thing about fake love is that it gives anger a noble attitude - hey, do you collect historical miniatures? J.A.B. %
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Date: 9/3/2012 12:31:00 AM
Interesting verse...Be careful what you write, even in jest...lol!!! Cynthia
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Date: 8/31/2012 7:09:00 PM
Is it impossible for love to stand all by itself? It always seems to need a prop..When the prop fails, love too drops..! Jag
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Date: 8/31/2012 4:01:00 PM
unfortunately some people let material things get in the way of true loving feelings. very profoundly writ! Best regards in all that you do, Cindy
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:38:00 PM
I hope this one hasn't happened to you...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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