Psalm: Spring of Paradise

With the eyes of an eagle, men and women are in your sight. With your eyes oh Lord, you see all who dwell on the earth. You saw me as wine flooded my tongue, the bottle emptied of all its sorrows. For I was weak, a wretched soul at the end of the gallows. The hangman’s noose tight about my scrawny neck. You were there, with tears and a smile. You saw the end from the beginning, You — the Alpha and Omega. You sacrificed the strong drink, replacing it with water — water cool and crisp from the spring of paradise. The petty officer with his serpentine tattoo tried to swallow me whole. The stormy seas suddenly calmed by the warmth of your words as you spoke through wise lips your truth. Oh Lord of men and seas, cleanse me with your brine. See your servant who prays with humble lips, on her knees. Lift our feet above shallow shores to the heights of tomorrow, where no suffering will defeat us, only sparkle our uniforms. 9/9/2019 Write a Psalm Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Riddle
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:53 AM
I like the changing of wine to a life giving spring. You write like one who is truly thankful. Congrats on a fine win. Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:35 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:57 AM
- Congratulations Kim, on your beautiful winning poem ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:58 AM
Wow Kim, this a spiritual masterpiece beautifully composed! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:28 AM
This is a powerful prayer - a lament followed by a prayer of confidence! Congratulations Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 10:44 PM
This is wonderful. I'm so delighted by it... God bless you and congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:32 PM
Thank you, Regina!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 3:07 AM
What a psalm! " You were there, with tears and a smile. You saw the end from the beginning, You — the Alpha and Omega." - Nicely done, Kim. Bravo to you!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:23 AM
Thanks so much, Caren :)
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 9:25 PM
Great contemporary flavor, Kim! Best of luck in the contest. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:23 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
May Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 9:56 AM
WOW Kim it's like I opened this straight to Psalms, wonderfully written my friend!!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Thank you so much :)
Warrior Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Very well crafted my friend...I see a win in sight...^WW^ :o)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:45 AM
A very nicely written verse, Kim, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, John!
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