Psalm: Spring of Paradise

With the eyes of an eagle, men and women are in your sight. With your eyes oh Lord, you see all who dwell on the earth. You saw me as wine flooded my tongue, the bottle emptied of all its sorrows. For I was weak, a wretched soul at the end of the gallows. The hangman’s noose tight about my scrawny neck. You were there, with tears and a smile. You saw the end from the beginning, You — the Alpha and Omega. You sacrificed the strong drink, replacing it with water — water cool and crisp from the spring of paradise. The petty officer with his serpentine tattoo tried to swallow me whole. The stormy seas suddenly calmed by the warmth of your words as you spoke through wise lips your truth. Oh Lord of men and seas, cleanse me with your brine. See your servant who prays with humble lips, on her knees. Lift our feet above shallow shores to the heights of tomorrow, where no suffering will defeat us, only sparkle our uniforms. 9/9/2019 Write a Psalm Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina Riddle

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Date: 9/27/2019 9:53:00 AM
I like the changing of wine to a life giving spring. You write like one who is truly thankful. Congrats on a fine win. Hugs Rick.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Richard!
Date: 9/27/2019 4:57:00 AM
- Congratulations Kim, on your beautiful winning poem ... well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:34:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/27/2019 2:58:00 AM
Wow Kim, this a spiritual masterpiece beautifully composed! Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
Date: 9/27/2019 2:28:00 AM
This is a powerful prayer - a lament followed by a prayer of confidence! Congratulations Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 9/26/2019 10:44:00 PM
This is wonderful. I'm so delighted by it... God bless you and congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2019 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Regina!
Date: 9/10/2019 3:07:00 AM
What a psalm! " You were there, with tears and a smile. You saw the end from the beginning, You — the Alpha and Omega." - Nicely done, Kim. Bravo to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 6:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren :)
Date: 9/9/2019 9:25:00 PM
Great contemporary flavor, Kim! Best of luck in the contest. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2019 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! :)
Date: 9/9/2019 9:56:00 AM
WOW Kim it's like I opened this straight to Psalms, wonderfully written my friend!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2019 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 9/9/2019 8:59:00 AM
Very well crafted my friend...I see a win in sight...^WW^ :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2019 1:54:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 9/9/2019 7:45:00 AM
A very nicely written verse, Kim, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2019 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, John!
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