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Ps-Eternally Free

Just Confess Everything

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Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/19/2008 2:39:00 PM

Wonderful message! Nobody except you can have such a profound advice. Congratulations to you!! Love to you and yours, Chitra

Date: 11/18/2008 2:27:00 PM

Such a wonderful message in this poem. Congratulations on your second place finish in the PS contest. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/18/2008 8:26:00 AM

The 10 " Our Fathers " , worked .... Well done Michael , and write onnnnnn ....

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/18/2008 5:52:00 AM

A meaningful ps piece, Michael! Congratulations on your 2nd place win! ~Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/18/2008 5:11:00 AM

You are on a roll Michael Jordan! Congrats once again on another winning poem! Love ya, Shar

Teresita Cailo

Date: 11/18/2008 3:20:00 AM

My first time to read this, Michael... and let me be the first to say congratulations for placing 2nd in Mr. Brian's contest :) TEri

Dima N.

Date: 11/17/2008 3:01:00 AM

Wow... we need to remember that all it takes just to let it all out and liberate that one breath choking the other aspects of our life... your approach just gives a different perspective to things... Great, Take care, D.

Janice Smith

Date: 11/13/2008 3:31:00 PM

This is a great ps, so much said in just five words........Blessings.......In His grip......By His grace........JEPR

Adell Foster

Date: 11/12/2008 7:20:00 AM

Well Michael this is a good way of purging the soul, by just confessing everything... dirty little secrets and the clean ones as well always have a way of coming out at the most inopportune times... ;-) I'm with you on this one my friend... Free your mind and the rest will follow indeed... I just wonder how many are brave enough to do so...lol Thank you for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blesings, Always, Adell

Sue Mason

Date: 11/11/2008 5:13:00 PM

LOL .... its 2 minutes later, and I'm still smiling. Caught totally off guard, the title is exquisite, Michael. Great job! Only sounds like a 5th Step when I think about it too long ... smile ...

Brian Strand

Date: 11/8/2008 11:53:00 PM

Nice one Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Patsy Buckner

Date: 11/8/2008 9:37:00 PM

Awesome Michael, Simply Awesome... Straight and to The Point. It's a sure winner... Thank You for your kind words for "My Love". I need all the encouragement I can get. And you are such an inspiration. Thanks again, and God Bless, Patsy

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 11/8/2008 11:08:00 AM

Michael...your economy of words is charming. I love it. Thank you for the compliment on "Silent House" Do you know when the next group of those chosen will come through? Had it not been for you, I would have never known I made it through this bunch. Thanks. My email is lanomore@yahoo.com if you can answer this question Thanks again. Patricia

Lena W

Date: 11/8/2008 10:47:00 AM

Thats a wow to me as i sit in awe. Lena

Date: 11/8/2008 10:15:00 AM

So much truth in just three words. The title enhances the poem acting almost as a fourth line to send your message. Well done. Thank you for your kind words on my epigram. These short poems are challenging. Karen

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/7/2008 6:21:00 PM

Very nice done!Michael I was wondering how I can get a copy of your poety book.I know you sell it thru Lulu.com but I would like to own a signed copy from you.Please email me and let me know if you can a copy for me.I will really appreciate it.I live here in the US too.Thanks.God bless you! D.

Robert Davidson

Date: 11/6/2008 9:09:00 AM

very good Michael and thank you so much for your comments on my poem Not Rearing Pigs. Sorry for not getting back to you but my computer has been having dreadful trouble connecting to the internet. Robert

Mc Mc

Date: 11/6/2008 6:53:00 AM

wonderful my friend -says a mouthful - results saitisfying if applied! keep em coming!!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/5/2008 9:48:00 PM

Hi Michael! You just hit the nail on the head :P Nice statement poem! Blessings! D.

P Sheart

Date: 11/5/2008 3:36:00 PM

Hello Michael Three words say alot. You live by these words making them all the more special. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia Good luck in contest!!!

Deneen White

Date: 11/5/2008 3:05:00 PM

and the rest will take care of itself, Michael you don't even have to ask of course I will, few words powerful write, thanks for you comments, nd trust and believe that I will, take care D-nyce

Liz Thomas

Date: 11/5/2008 1:56:00 PM

This is simple yet so so powerful. Thank you.

Christy Hardy

Date: 11/5/2008 12:48:00 PM

Thank you so much....you are so special in our lives.....loved this write, always, Christy

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/5/2008 11:57:00 AM

Wow. Truly excellent. This form seems so incredibly difficult to me. Well done! Love, Shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/5/2008 3:31:00 AM

And for your penance , say 10 Our Fathers... (joke Michael... joke ) ... This new ps form is catching on , and you got it nailed-on ,here ... Keep well and thanks for your kind words ...