Prussian Feet

Prussian feet
in a hurry to run to warmth
Past all badness
Past side tracking
needing the steam crack 
a good soaking brings
These blue feet
frozen in fear
from a stepping in ice pools
of beckoning sin
have never been calloused before.
Never touched strife
and bristled scar tissue
Never fell headlong 
in a devious freeze
'till now.
But run they do
and run they will
aching from stinging
and paining from thaw
Cold feet
in a hurry to run to warmth
to steam baths of redemption
and miracle mending
Flesh revived from Prussian
to pink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 6:57 AM
I like the play on Prussian it manipulates the reading and the ending ... fantastic write exhibiting great talent.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace