Pruning

If I pruned now
 in the hotbed coals of summer heat
the sap would run, lapping at the trunk
 trickling down the bark and diminish the bloom,
those hopeful dreams of next year growth
 would easily fade away to leaves
and the flowering would disappear
 so far now, after every rain
I hold myself back resisting
 the growth spurts 
of every bush and branch
 waiting for the fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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July 27, 2021 at 12:31 AM
Oh i see, what a sublime poem! Im not sure but it seems to be that you don't prune because you can wait for the fall to prune the trees. Wonderful idea methinks and maybe metaphoric as well. Kudos!! ------<<<<<<<^^^^^>>>>>>>>~~~~~~>>>>>> Also plz do read and comment my newest poem here.
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