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Prunes

I find that when we eat prunes, We tend to sit in cold bathrooms; Although it may be a trial, We fit right in with rank and file. The wafting scent of strange perfumes, Are too much like exhaust fumes; Though it’s not meant to offend the nose, You can’t compare it to a rose. All that’s said may sound arcane, But this I find is a good domain; For it’s true it is a small event, But you must admit it’s time well spent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/13/2013 4:22:00 AM
Hey Elizabeth, just love this,, and your wonderful sense of humour,, glad i came back here browsing...
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:15:00 PM
So delicately put! I would expect no less from your creative pen. '...you can't compare it with a rose' is priceless! :)
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Date: 5/2/2012 4:55:00 AM
hehehe ! Now this write dear poet, truly shows that the poet you are ! And I love the shrouding of the aftermath of the ingesting of one of my favorite tasting dried fruit ! Great job Elizabeth ! I have definitely enjoyed your writes this a.m. my friend ! How 'bout throwing an updated write in there dear poet....you're making me wait toooooo long ! *smiles* I do like journeying through your past writes though ! Have a good day....much love, james
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:57:00 AM
haha and I thought I was the only one who wrote poems on toilet paper! very funny and it doesn't get any truer than the last verse
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Date: 10/25/2011 7:46:00 AM
LOL, thanks for a good chuckle on this wet Tuesday : )
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:12:00 PM
Your a hoot! times up at the library. Good
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Robert Johnson
Date: 6/7/2011 12:12:00 PM
bye

Book: Shattered Sighs