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Peace is found when people come to their senses Stop the bickering and contentious debates Words of anger fortify our defenses Peace is found when people come to their senses We should make restitution and mend fences Arguing is one of our worst human traits Peace is found when people come to their senses Stop the bickering and contentious debates

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Date: 8/10/2023 12:01:00 PM
Succinctly put Lin! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 8/7/2023 7:03:00 PM
Lin, I like the positive message in your well written triolet! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/26/2023 10:09:00 AM
Discussion tries to resolve the differences, arguments destroy relationships. Nice triolet, Lin.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2023 12:54:00 PM
Your assessment is absolutely correct, Jay. Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2023 8:39:00 AM
very well said .. in triplicate lol:-) good one Lin:-)hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/26/2023 12:54:00 PM
So goes the form in trips. Thanks and hugs, Jan.

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