John Posey Poet Rhyme

Prophecy

I look into forever
And I'm blinded by the pain
Of visions of an always
That never hears your name.
A lifetime spent without you
Is all I see in store --
With painful days outside your eyes --
And constant heartache evermore.

I see familiar faces --
Which once were filled with love --
Their tear-filled eyes reflecting
A dying, wounded dove.
Reality surrounds me
As I wake up in today
To find our love eternal
Has, somehow, lost its way.

I see emptiness inside me
Telling me you're gone --
So, I look outside tomorrow
For strength to carry on.
And, as tomorrow fades
Into a yesterday,
I see a love, inside my heart,
That just won't fade away.

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Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 10:26 AM A great poem of lost emotions.... ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda John Posey July 7, 2013 at 10:29 AM Linda, you are always the bearer of good news. Thanks so much..... Jake

Sasha Maharaj July 4, 2013 at 12:45 AM Wow :) Congrats on the Win ... Beautiful n sad poem. just what i feel as well. John Posey July 4, 2013 at 1:53 AM Sasha, Thanks for your comments. My pleasure is that it is read by some very talented poets....Jake

Varsha Tomar July 3, 2013 at 12:05 AM Beautiful poem Jake...there's so much to learn from you! Congratulations on your win. John Posey July 3, 2013 at 4:06 AM Your comments are so kind, my friend. I will put them with my most treasured possessions. Love you dearly.... Jake

Joyce Johnson July 2, 2013 at 7:49 PM Congratulations on your win, John. This truly is a lovely and emotional poem. Love, joyce John Posey July 3, 2013 at 4:46 AM Thank you, dear friend..... Jake

Karen Anglesey July 2, 2013 at 6:25 PM Jake, Gentle poetic artistry that tugs at the heart. Congrats on the win :) John Posey July 3, 2013 at 4:01 AM Karen, I have learned that one experience like this can last a lifetime. Thank God, we don't have to learn from personal experience.... You are so kind with your kudos....Jake John Posey July 2, 2013 at 6:44 PM Thank you, dearest. You are a treasure and your visits are always pleasant experiences ....Jake

Tim Ryerson July 2, 2013 at 6:18 PM You are quickly becoming one of my favorite poets, Jake...Beauty comes from pain and this is a perfect example of that...Also thank you for your kind comments and support...I value them greatly...Congratulations sir - Tim John Posey July 2, 2013 at 6:41 PM Thanks, Tim. I am awed at what I read in your portfolio and your kind comments are treasured..... Jake

Suzanne Delaney July 2, 2013 at 10:26 AM Jake: Your poem reaches into the depths of all our despairs Nothing so bare as when love is gone.. Congratulations . SuZ John Posey July 2, 2013 at 2:03 PM Precious SuZ.... This poem can be likened to the feelings within a written verse without your sweet comment.

Bukang Liwayway July 2, 2013 at 10:02 AM this is superbly awesome write my friend John..Big big congratulations on your win..Have a good day!! :) Maria John Posey July 2, 2013 at 10:06 AM Thank you, sweet Maria. You bring happiness into my portfolio.... Love ya... Jake

Carrie Richards July 2, 2013 at 8:23 AM This poem is so powerful, and overflows with emotion, loss and sadness, John. Such emotive writing at it's finest. Congratulations! John Posey July 2, 2013 at 9:56 AM Carrie, Darlin', you always come through with the sweetest comments..... They lift my spirit and are immensely treasured.... Thank You.... Jake

Barbara Gorelick July 2, 2013 at 7:15 AM What a wonderful poem..sad but it speaks to me..congrats on your big win. BG John Posey July 2, 2013 at 8:12 AM Barbara, these emotions can fit many situations. I hope they never cause anyone any additional distress.... Love you, dearly..... Jake

Joseph May July 2, 2013 at 6:24 AM awesome write John...congrats on your win John Posey July 2, 2013 at 8:09 AM Many thanks, Joseph. I've always been proud of this one.....Jake

Connie Gildersleeve July 2, 2013 at 5:56 AM John this is an excellent poem, full of emotions. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie John Posey July 2, 2013 at 8:06 AM Thanks, Connie. This is based on my reaction to events involving close friends... Sometimes they hurt just as much as if they were happening to me.... Jake

Eileen Manassian July 2, 2013 at 1:43 AM Congratulations on this superb win. It is very hauntingly beautiful. :) John Posey July 2, 2013 at 1:52 AM Thank you, dear Eileen. I am glad you liked it.... Jake

Ilene Bauer July 2, 2013 at 1:18 AM this is a great poem! congratulations on your win! John Posey July 2, 2013 at 1:54 AM Ilene, I thank you for the good news you bring.... Your visit is always brings joy....Jake

Skat A July 1, 2013 at 9:39 PM Hi John, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT John Posey July 2, 2013 at 1:58 AM SKAT, your news of my winning is really exciting.... Though just a visit alone would be as sweet.... Jake

Nathan D. July 1, 2013 at 9:18 PM congrats ' NATE John Posey July 2, 2013 at 2:00 AM Thank you, my friend. You are welcome in my house.....Jake

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs November 12, 2012 at 7:35 AM Very nice poem

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2012 at 6:58 PM It is hard to hold a love that is unreturned or lost, it scorches our very souls and can leave a hollow husk where our hearts once lived. Very powerful imagery here. You have talent. John Posey November 10, 2012 at 7:03 PM Thank You Richard. Your talent gives weight to your comments. I appreciate your visit. You are always welcome..... Jake

Poet Destroyer A November 6, 2012 at 7:42 PM Hi John, love is nice.. why would you want it to go away..... keep it...pd John Posey June 21, 2013 at 8:40 PM It's hard to kindle a love that's not returned. Thanks for your comments... Hugs to ya.... Jake