Prophecy

I look into forever And I'm blinded by the pain Of visions of an always That never hears your name. A lifetime spent without you Is all I see in store -- With painful days outside your eyes -- And constant heartache evermore. I see familiar faces -- Which once were filled with love -- Their tear-filled eyes reflecting A dying, wounded dove. Reality surrounds me As I wake up in today To find our love eternal Has, somehow, lost its way. I see emptiness inside me Telling me you're gone -- So, I look outside tomorrow For strength to carry on. And, as tomorrow fades Into a yesterday, I see a love, inside my heart, That just won't fade away.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:26:00 AM

A great poem of lost emotions.... ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. Take Care * Linda

John Posey
Date: 7/7/2013 10:29:00 AM

Linda, you are always the bearer of good news. Thanks so much..... Jake

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 7/4/2013 12:45:00 AM

Wow :) Congrats on the Win ... Beautiful n sad poem. just what i feel as well.

John Posey
Date: 7/4/2013 1:53:00 AM

Sasha, Thanks for your comments. My pleasure is that it is read by some very talented poets....Jake

Varsha Tomar

Date: 7/3/2013 12:05:00 AM

Beautiful poem Jake...there's so much to learn from you! Congratulations on your win.

John Posey
Date: 7/3/2013 4:06:00 AM

Your comments are so kind, my friend. I will put them with my most treasured possessions. Love you dearly.... Jake

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/2/2013 7:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, John. This truly is a lovely and emotional poem. Love, joyce

John Posey
Date: 7/3/2013 4:46:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend..... Jake

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/2/2013 6:25:00 PM

Jake, Gentle poetic artistry that tugs at the heart. Congrats on the win :)

John Posey
Date: 7/3/2013 4:01:00 AM

Karen, I have learned that one experience like this can last a lifetime. Thank God, we don't have to learn from personal experience.... You are so kind with your kudos....Jake

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, dearest. You are a treasure and your visits are always pleasant experiences ....Jake

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/2/2013 6:18:00 PM

You are quickly becoming one of my favorite poets, Jake...Beauty comes from pain and this is a perfect example of that...Also thank you for your kind comments and support...I value them greatly...Congratulations sir - Tim

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 6:41:00 PM

Thanks, Tim. I am awed at what I read in your portfolio and your kind comments are treasured..... Jake

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/2/2013 10:26:00 AM

Jake: Your poem reaches into the depths of all our despairs Nothing so bare as when love is gone.. Congratulations . SuZ

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 2:03:00 PM

Precious SuZ.... This poem can be likened to the feelings within a written verse without your sweet comment.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 7/2/2013 10:02:00 AM

this is superbly awesome write my friend John..Big big congratulations on your win..Have a good day!! :) Maria

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Maria. You bring happiness into my portfolio.... Love ya... Jake

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/2/2013 8:23:00 AM

This poem is so powerful, and overflows with emotion, loss and sadness, John. Such emotive writing at it's finest. Congratulations!

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 9:56:00 AM

Carrie, Darlin', you always come through with the sweetest comments..... They lift my spirit and are immensely treasured.... Thank You.... Jake

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/2/2013 7:15:00 AM

What a wonderful poem..sad but it speaks to me..congrats on your big win. BG

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 8:12:00 AM

Barbara, these emotions can fit many situations. I hope they never cause anyone any additional distress.... Love you, dearly..... Jake

Joseph May

Date: 7/2/2013 6:24:00 AM

awesome write John...congrats on your win

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 8:09:00 AM

Many thanks, Joseph. I've always been proud of this one.....Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/2/2013 5:56:00 AM

John this is an excellent poem, full of emotions. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 8:06:00 AM

Thanks, Connie. This is based on my reaction to events involving close friends... Sometimes they hurt just as much as if they were happening to me.... Jake

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/2/2013 1:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this superb win. It is very hauntingly beautiful. :)

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 1:52:00 AM

Thank you, dear Eileen. I am glad you liked it.... Jake

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/2/2013 1:18:00 AM

this is a great poem! congratulations on your win!

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 1:54:00 AM

Ilene, I thank you for the good news you bring.... Your visit is always brings joy....Jake

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2013 9:39:00 PM

Hi John, a great winning poem, in Nathan's (dark, lost, broken emotions) contest. :-) SKAT

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 1:58:00 AM

SKAT, your news of my winning is really exciting.... Though just a visit alone would be as sweet.... Jake

Nathan D.

Date: 7/1/2013 9:18:00 PM

congrats ' NATE

John Posey
Date: 7/2/2013 2:00:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. You are welcome in my house.....Jake

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 11/12/2012 7:35:00 AM

Very nice poem

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2012 6:58:00 PM

It is hard to hold a love that is unreturned or lost, it scorches our very souls and can leave a hollow husk where our hearts once lived. Very powerful imagery here. You have talent.

John Posey
Date: 11/10/2012 7:03:00 PM

Thank You Richard. Your talent gives weight to your comments. I appreciate your visit. You are always welcome..... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2012 7:42:00 PM

Hi John, love is nice.. why would you want it to go away..... keep it...pd

John Posey
Date: 6/21/2013 8:40:00 PM

It's hard to kindle a love that's not returned. Thanks for your comments... Hugs to ya.... Jake