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We could cross the copse with ease yet risk no wound to our knees, if we'd wear our heavy boots and watch hidden roots of trees. a jueju (quije) March 9, 2020 4 lines, 7 syllables each. Jungle demands ease don't injure your knees. Heavy hiking boots handle those tree roots. a jueju (wujue) written March 28, 2017 4 lines, 5 syllable each.

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Date: 4/2/2020 4:45:00 PM
a unique topic you wrote on, Reason. Cleverly done!
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Date: 4/3/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Open-ended to say the least if you take it as a metaphor. Appreciate your comment, hope you are staying well.
Date: 4/2/2020 11:33:00 AM
Yeah, we need proper gears in all our ventures..I'm honoured to have your poem Reason..
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Date: 4/2/2020 4:31:00 PM
thanks, Jenish. So glad for the placement in your contest, poet.
Date: 3/15/2020 10:58:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for your comments. God bless you.
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Date: 4/2/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thanks, Beata, I'll go and read what you wrote. To return the favor for such a positive, uplifting reply.
Date: 3/9/2020 10:03:00 PM
Yes, the proper gear will help :)
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Date: 3/12/2020 11:07:00 AM
thanks, Eve, and a little like the coronavirus, a complete covering might be the best choice over boots (or a mask). Appreciate your reply.
Date: 3/9/2020 3:36:00 PM
Your pen has indeed flowed. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/9/2020 10:08:00 PM
I welcome your comment, Caren. I should wish you were the hostess. Thanks.

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