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Proof Unveiled

(*unveiled*)

       she said no....
staccato heartbeats
          tell otherwise



                                                (*proof*)

                                               never again---
                                                    toilet tank hides bottles
                                                              drowning resolve







---for Chris' contest  O_o

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Adell Foster Date: 9/24/2010 4:41:00 PM Indeed the proof is in more than the pudding, Congrats on your win in the contest my friend and thank you for your most welcomed comments on my tanka "Sweet Sanctuary" I truly appreciate it :-) God Bless, Always, Adell Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 9/23/2010 2:22:00 AM Great writes here, Nikko. I think the "proof" is just terrific. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/21/2010 6:30:00 AM excellent. congrats on these winners. Harry Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/21/2010 4:22:00 AM Congratulations Nikko on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/21/2010 12:00:00 AM Congratulations on your win with these two gems! Great going Nikko! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2010 10:54:00 PM Two AWESOME ones (of course he has to rank you high with TWO good ones!!) Congratulations. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/20/2010 3:04:00 PM Nice one Nikko..sad, but well written..congrats. BG Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 9/20/2010 2:48:00 PM A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/20/2010 2:01:00 PM Nikko, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/20/2010 1:35:00 PM Excellent Nikko, very much deserving of it's winning place in this wonderful contest by Chris >> James :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/20/2010 1:23:00 PM Congratulations on this 3rd place in the contest, nikko Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/20/2010 12:48:00 PM unique as always!Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/20/2010 11:50:00 AM Congrats Nikko on your super win in the Senryu contest.. an awesome victory sweet friend.. enjoy with luv... Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 9/20/2010 10:56:00 AM nicee ^.^, from the looks of it this one's a winner :), congrats Nikko, =(^.^)=Royal Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/20/2010 10:23:00 AM awesome senryu, congrats on your win in the contest Nikko Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 9/18/2010 7:06:00 AM Hey Nikko, parehong iyong Senryus ay malaki! Wow, ikaw wrote maraming poems kamakailan-lamang at ako ay kaya busy sa ibang bagay! And thank you for all your comments!! Ingat!...Gert:) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/16/2010 10:05:00 AM Enjoyed reading your poetry today Nikko. Hope you have a wonderful day. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/16/2010 12:09:00 AM wow, these are both SO GREAT,Nikko . I think you are great at senryu. Can you put two like this in his contest?? Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/15/2010 3:48:00 PM A combo of power-house senryus! You have told a story, sad, but true too often! ~Great job! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 9/15/2010 1:36:00 PM Well done! (I sent you soup mail) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/15/2010 1:00:00 PM Wow Nikko this one is amazing and a terrific entry for the contes by Chris... good luck my sweet friend.. enjoyed your powerful words...staccato heartbeats huh??? luv it.. Login to Reply

De R Date: 9/15/2010 11:04:00 AM Great entry for Chris's contest,nikko...A lot of people think that drinking away their problems is the solution...but it's not. Good luck in the contest !:) Emilia Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/15/2010 10:44:00 AM good one, good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Diane Locksley Date: 9/15/2010 10:34:00 AM There is no greater sadness than having a lover be a deceiver. Great work, Nikko. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/15/2010 9:48:00 AM Quite a moving poem, Nikko. Deception can cause people a lot of pain and some do resort to "drowning" their sorrows. Best wishes for success in Chris's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply