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She is a Battle Babe make you mouth her as a FAV. , all her work an automatic save, a rage'n rave, getcha cravin the ultimate poetic shave makin demons a quick grave and enticin angels to misbehave, She's a Battle Babe, no chance her style fades, she got genius in spades, covert clout leavin you shamed with sheer doubt, livin to learn her upshot ways, offend ya with a biting wit, pen ya witha whip whetted on the blood of your best days, love ya like a lionized legionare, waste ya like a puny prisoner pinned against her spiked legs, wicked wrath and affectionate genuflection the perfection of the Battle Babe's barbarous pathways, the Patron Poetess of the Lady Ink Crew not fearin you, not hatin you, she's just beatin every ounce of you You say she's crazy, lazy and hastey some sort of Prima Donna in distress lost in lunacy pastey, but this is simply a rumor reflected from your own filthy and phony majesty, she prepares for battle settled and seasoned like a lioness in love with the last hour of hunger quiet and confident, instincts infallible in Society's saddistic scramble, pupils green aglow, piercing the pale lies of this business' infatuation with profit's ramble, the salt of twilight stings her senses, your stunted reaction she will savor thoughts of your company falling from her K-9's kill of what was once friendship once reasoned, she will annihilate facts in the false traffic of your tabulated fantasy, she will destroy you for assuming truth in sunshine made from touted travesty - J.A.B.

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Date: 6/4/2014 11:45:00 PM
I know a few ladies on the Soup, who this could pertain to....but, one in particular comes to mind first! I admire those invincible women who are not afraid to speak the truth.... This is an awesome write, Justin! I loved it!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/5/2014 12:35:00 PM
Battle Babes are the best kind Kelly! Battle Babes must trust the truth before they can speak the truth. Glad you got into the prowl Kelly, thanks. J.A.B.
Date: 6/3/2014 3:56:00 PM
hmmm, I had a feeling who this was and I think I guessed right, especially when I got to the very bottom of the comments! GREat poem in a style that she can much appreciate!!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/4/2014 8:52:00 PM
This poem is to be appreciated by all the great Poetesses who inevitably become Matriarchs of art and life Andrea. I'm excited that you enjoyed the style and philosophy of this most energetic and unusual poem. You will find traces of yourself within the spirit of this composition Andrea. J.A.B.
Date: 6/3/2014 10:18:00 AM
Must be for the contest where he is going to set it to music..Interesting work..Poet Battle Babe...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/3/2014 3:48:00 PM
No, not for a poetry contest, made for a heart contest Sara. This write will not be submitted in any contest, but thanks for the sweet encouragement my friend! The Battle Babe is for me. J.A.B.
Date: 5/28/2014 6:16:00 AM
Also, for some reason the song We Dream Like Lions by Otep ran through my head.. totally different feel compared to this piece, but that's a weird mind for yah... love this poem~ ~Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/28/2014 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for the song reference. Weird minds make wonderful times Laura. You obviously understand soul battle. J.A.B.
Date: 5/27/2014 8:13:00 PM
This poem has me roaring happily in my heart. Speaking of roaring, lovely avatar. This is so very powerful. "she prepares for battle settled and seasoned like a lioness in love with the last hour of hunger" Love love love that line and many more. Also, thank you for the very sweet comments on my poetry. You are very kind to say those things. This poem would be amazing to hear in your voice. You're the best! Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Date: 5/28/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thanks thanks thanks my gifted and beautiful friend!!! I can't believe you quoted my favorite line from this wild write Laura. Laura you earned that praise, you are truly a Master Poetess, and I'm proud to be able to share art and soul with you! Well, I've gotta deep, passionate voice to go along with the rhymes, like sweet thunder.J.A.B.
Date: 5/22/2014 10:35:00 PM
Hello Justin, If only, I could find the right words to elaborate how astonishing this rap truly is. You have, again, given your readers something new to enjoy. Thank you for expressing your pen, with your soulful, gestures and thoughts of this troubled but courageous soul, who lives the only way they've known all this time, perhaps. Piercing and punting to stay at float is never easy. I admire this write, much battle from all inspiring women. The ruling of your ink has been eloquent as its ever been. Finalizing the end with sunshine, resembles of fine art. Enjoyed this one, hope it's enjoyed by all, who fit this description, no need to be filled with greed... always~ PD
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/23/2014 1:48:00 AM
Written for a woman with the Will to bleed for her beliefs, one who finds no rest in resignation to the status quo. You are the embodiment of the rebel and beauty expressed in the spirit of this Art, the Art of owning your Cause, which we should all aspire to. Thank you Linda. J.A.B.
Date: 5/22/2014 11:44:00 AM
J A B. hits like a slam. Is this for Verlena's slam contest? I'm enjoying this. Powerful, and prowls all over the page. Many of us are late bloomers around here. Only a true leader holds a staff this way. Awesome quill.......................SKAt
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Date: 5/22/2014 1:14:00 PM
Continued... glad your feelin the prowl & passion in this, and there are many amazing, alluring and fearless female champions here, wild in words and living as leaders, you are one of them Skat. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/22/2014 1:08:00 PM
Your intuition serves you very well my smarty Skat. My Quill had a rapping will to it on this write. I actually do rap writes every now and then, its a fun and powerful way to express poetic meaning, very underappreciated by the bigoted old timers. Slaming and rap rhyme are destin for each others style, all legit.
Date: 5/22/2014 8:08:00 AM
This is beyond good, I am sure Linda will love this one. Bravo!
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Date: 5/22/2014 12:45:00 PM
Yes Richard, Linda will love this poem because she lives this prowl. She leads, she loves, she devours doubters. This hypermodern poem of ruthless self assertion is for all women who find their natural authority and charisma subversively challenged by weak attempts at saving false strength. J.A.B.

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