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Promises On a Whim

Thinking no further than today Almost naively believing Tomorrow may or may not come Know everything has its price Especially naiveté AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted in March, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/29/2018 5:11:00 AM

Naïveté does indeed have rewards too for vulnerable people who repeatedly believe in the goodness of others are the happiest people on earth, feeling their humanity, satisfied and fulfilled. I think you could make this into an amazing Line poem, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2018 8:21:00 AM

Yes how true, it certainly is amazing to witness naiveté that is not stifled. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/29/2018 8:21:00 AM

Yes how true, it certainly is amazing to witness naiveté that is not stifled. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.