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Promises On a Whim

Thinking no further than today
Almost naively believing
Tomorrow may or may not come

Know everything has its price
Especially naiveté



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

conflicthopeinnocencetodaywisdomfree verse

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Caren Krutsinger

March 29, 2018 at 5:11 AM

Naïveté does indeed have rewards too for vulnerable people who repeatedly believe in the goodness of others are the happiest people on earth, feeling their humanity, satisfied and fulfilled. I think you could make this into an amazing Line poem, Line.

Line Gauthier

March 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM

Yes how true, it certainly is amazing to witness naiveté that is not stifled. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Line Gauthier

March 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM

Yes how true, it certainly is amazing to witness naiveté that is not stifled. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.