Barbara Gorelick Poet Verse

Promise Tableau

A break in the clouds,
sun beams on rain drops.
Brilliant colors
lift winter spirits.
And we remember
the rainbow's promise…


"Happiness doesn't lie in the objects we gather around us.
To find it, all we need to do is open our eyes"

Barbara 
Gorelick
10/17/14
Design Your Tableau contest...

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Sara Kendrick October 29, 2014 at 9:53 AM Great one about the topic chosen..I enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 25, 2014 at 9:09 PM I remember this gem. Congrats,Barbara.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2014 at 7:30 AM - There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,Barbara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus October 25, 2014 at 6:36 AM Hi Barbara....I knew this would be a winner...and so it is! Congratulations! Have a nice day. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta October 25, 2014 at 5:35 AM Wonderfully done poem, congrats on the win, barb

Maurice Yvonne October 25, 2014 at 4:57 AM I think you are the rainbow promised, Congratulations on your win.

Maurice Yvonne October 25, 2014 at 4:55 AM This is a stunning tableau Barbara.

Joyce Johnson October 24, 2014 at 6:21 PM Well done, Barbara. One of my favorites. Love, Joyce

Brenda Meier-Hans October 24, 2014 at 5:19 PM Beautiful Barbara. There is always a rainbow when you open your eyes. Congratulations on your win

Jan Allison October 24, 2014 at 4:04 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Daver Austin October 20, 2014 at 4:03 PM Picturesque. "Sun beams on raindrops" Good stuff, Barb. Love, daver

Maurice Yvonne October 20, 2014 at 4:19 AM This is stunning Babara. Absolutely beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2014 at 7:43 PM yeah, me and my movies. My goal is to see every decent movie made from now till eternity. That's why I can't watch reruns. I don't have time for that. I wonder if movies are in heaven!!!

Paul Callus October 19, 2014 at 5:32 AM Well done, Barbara; you nailed this one! Just beautiful...and a winner, no doubt! // paul

Sara Kendrick October 18, 2014 at 2:23 PM Open our eyes to nature and it will bring happiness..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Richard Lamoureux October 18, 2014 at 8:22 AM Beautiful!!!

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2014 at 10:27 PM you did an amazing job with yours. Nette comes up with such inspiring challenges.

Frederic Parker October 17, 2014 at 5:48 PM Lifts the spirits and gives hope, nothing says beauty like a rainbow....good luck in the contest

Jan Allison October 17, 2014 at 3:22 PM Beautifully penned Barbara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans October 17, 2014 at 2:34 PM I love this quote Barbara but thought it would be difficult to write, but I find you did a wonderful job showing us some very beautiful examples. GL