Promise Tableau

A break in the clouds,
sun beams on rain drops.
Brilliant colors
lift winter spirits.
And we remember
the rainbow's promise…


"Happiness doesn't lie in the objects we gather around us.
To find it, all we need to do is open our eyes"

Barbara 
Gorelick
10/17/14
Design Your Tableau contest...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/29/2014 9:53:00 AM
Great one about the topic chosen..I enjoyed reading your winner..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:09:00 PM
I remember this gem. Congrats,Barbara.
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:30:00 AM
- There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,Barbara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/25/2014 6:36:00 AM
Hi Barbara....I knew this would be a winner...and so it is! Congratulations! Have a nice day. // paul
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:35:00 AM
Wonderfully done poem, congrats on the win, barb
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:57:00 AM
I think you are the rainbow promised, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:55:00 AM
This is a stunning tableau Barbara.
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Date: 10/24/2014 6:21:00 PM
Well done, Barbara. One of my favorites. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/24/2014 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful Barbara. There is always a rainbow when you open your eyes. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/24/2014 4:04:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Barbara:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/20/2014 4:03:00 PM
Picturesque. "Sun beams on raindrops" Good stuff, Barb. Love, daver
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Date: 10/20/2014 4:19:00 AM
This is stunning Babara. Absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 10/19/2014 7:43:00 PM
yeah, me and my movies. My goal is to see every decent movie made from now till eternity. That's why I can't watch reruns. I don't have time for that. I wonder if movies are in heaven!!!
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Date: 10/19/2014 5:32:00 AM
Well done, Barbara; you nailed this one! Just beautiful...and a winner, no doubt! // paul
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:23:00 PM
Open our eyes to nature and it will bring happiness..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2014 8:22:00 AM
Beautiful!!!
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:27:00 PM
you did an amazing job with yours. Nette comes up with such inspiring challenges.
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Date: 10/17/2014 5:48:00 PM
Lifts the spirits and gives hope, nothing says beauty like a rainbow....good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/17/2014 3:22:00 PM
Beautifully penned Barbara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/17/2014 2:34:00 PM
I love this quote Barbara but thought it would be difficult to write, but I find you did a wonderful job showing us some very beautiful examples. GL
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