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Promise of Love

Their dreams filled their heads As they drove up the hill To the orphanage, they hoped and prayed For a child that laid Swaddled and warm In a crib, to bring home on this day But a little bit older, The child seemed cold Yet a smile was worn on his face So the couple agreed To love and to feed This child they’ll take from this place And though they have nothing No money in the bank No brand new house But to the child they’ll give a home As parents they swear To give all love and to care To treat this child as if was their own The dark of the night And the child he cried A burning horrible wail She’s a mother now And ran to his side Her loving was not meant to fail She took and she held So tight, bosom swelled As he hushed and fell back asleep He’s her child now So much love to allow Her son, forever to keep And though they have nothing No money in the bank No brand new house But to the child they’ll give a home As parents they swear To give all love and to care To treat this child as if was their own He is a man now With a wife of his own Yet barren as his mom and his dad To the car they had gone A new road they’re now on To the place he was as a lad They plan to adopt To share all they’ve got Though nothing they have to their name But it’s love that they’ll give For a child to live To grow happy and love just the same And though they have nothing No money in the bank No brand new house But to the child they’ll give a home As parents they swear To give all love and to care To treat this child as if was their own

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/28/2011 12:10:00 PM
How nice it is to see you writing again, Michael! Your poem is so touching. Those who have nothing but love to give often make great parents. My brother was always poor and raised 6 wonderful children on a mailman's salary. What a loving clan he has. My sister is wealthy and her three boys had everything handed to them. None are as happy as my brother's kids. Thank you for sharing and please visit us again! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Michael my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/25/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Michael
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:31:00 AM
Fantastic work! I am thinking about self-publishing my first book. Book availability will be print on demand only. I have to basically sell the book myself, and create the buzz. What are your thoughts? Has anyone ventured with self publishing?
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:38:00 PM
Way to go Michael, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 3:02:00 PM
So nice to see you posting poetry again, Michael. You were one of the first to comment when I first joined the soup long ago! What a heart touching poem this is....well done! Nice to see you back! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest, Michael
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Michael my friend. So wonderful to see you post and win. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/20/2011 4:39:00 PM
Wow, how great to see your name pop up..and writing as well as ever. Hope all is well...BG
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Date: 4/20/2011 10:23:00 AM
wonderful, dear, enthralling please enter this in the contest I am running real,unreal, or surreal [I think it's real?] Light & Love [If you miss this contest do try in the next]
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