Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Promise of Love

Jubilation of my triumph, comfort soothing sorrow,
Aspirations of my passions, today and tomorrow,
Reveling reveries-elysian that love brought to fore;
You are the gift I adore, smiling through my yore,
As tenor of forever-love reverberates in your sphere
When extolling you, dear, heartbeats-ardent cheer.

My dear, when I am with you, how fervid souls coo,
Lauding promise of love, mirthful impulses renew,
For you are my musings, my esoteric zealous dream,
My sensuous sassy dawn, hosting romantic theme,
Unfolding treasured albums endearing vibes reveal,
My precious gem of life, sparkling amorous appeal.

Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune,
While rejoicing gift of love endearing spirits croon
Vowing pledges eternal, reaffirming bonds anew,
Conferring in lyrics of love, streaming just for you,
For you are my melody, strumming love’s encore~
My verse and sweet chorus: I love you ever more.

April 9, 2023
Placed 10th: I Only Live To Love You Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Evelyn Judy Buehler May 8, 2023 at 8:39 AM A captivating verse, abounding in loveliness and romantic charm. Wonderful, Vijay. :)

Bill Baker April 14, 2023 at 2:17 PM Beautiful love poem, Vijay. It really flowed well. I liked the sprinkling of alliteration throughout. Have a great week! Bill

Christuraj Alex April 13, 2023 at 8:33 PM "My verse and sweet chorus: I love you ever more" -Love-filled passionate poem. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet April 13, 2023 at 6:37 PM Outstanding Vijay, I have no idea how I overlooked this. Added to my faves. The joy and love shown in this poem are palpable. The music is gentle, ethereal, and lovely. The beauty is staggering. To the winner go the accolades.

Heidi Sands April 11, 2023 at 5:49 AM Amazing! Beautifully written. This poem brings so much happiness with love. Outstanding Vijay. A definite Fave for me. I enjoyed this today :) Vijay Pandit April 11, 2023 at 1:04 PM Always a pleasure when you visit my friend. Many thanks for your supportive comments and your FAVE, Heidi. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Fin Chuuk April 10, 2023 at 5:43 PM You had me at mesmerizing, my friend. WOW WOW… My sensuous sassy dawn, that is just a breathtaking line. This whole piece is a masterpiece. So beautiful! A winner and a fave for me. Vijay Pandit April 11, 2023 at 12:54 PM So very kind of you my friend. So special to read your feedback and receive your FAVE, Fin. Many thanks.

Valsa George April 10, 2023 at 9:42 AM Melodious musings on love in choicest words.... making the heart beat in rapid rhythm! You are at your best in chanting love songs ! Win great, dear friend. Vijay Pandit April 11, 2023 at 12:53 PM So nice to hear that. Much appreciate your kind feedback, my friend. Many thanks, Valsa.

Joseph P. DiMino April 10, 2023 at 8:51 AM "Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune, While rejoicing gift of love endearing spirits croon Vowing pledges eternal," -- such wonderful declarations of love immortal. Beautiful writing! Vijay Pandit April 11, 2023 at 12:52 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks, Joe.

Mystic Rose Rose April 10, 2023 at 5:16 AM Rhythms of my heart, how within your heart attune, I hear the music of you and it sounds heavenly to the ear, winning wishes Vijay :) Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:26 AM Heavenly to the ear--so special to read your compliments, Vienna. Your remarks more eloquent than the poem. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel April 10, 2023 at 4:50 AM Romantic to the core, Vijay, beautiful:) Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:24 AM Much appreciate your complimentary feedback, Jo. Many thanks for your visit and your comments.

Tom Cunningham April 10, 2023 at 4:04 AM You write romantic verse so well Vijay, best of luck in the contest. Have a great week ahead. Tom Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:24 AM So nice to hear that Tom. Thanks for being there for everyone. Much appreciate, as always.

Speaks Volumes April 9, 2023 at 8:35 PM A lovely poem Viijay. Beautifully written. Soft and tender. I love it Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:23 AM Thank you Wendy. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole April 9, 2023 at 5:21 PM "My precious gem of life, sparkling amorous appeal." Such a beautiful thought. This is soft, dreamy and romantic, all at the same time. Simply breathtaking, Vijay. Good luck in the contest. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:23 AM So nice to hear that my friend. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate your support--many thanks, Brandy.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2023 at 7:48 AM - Love described in beautiful lines, Vijay - A wonderful poem that promises true love :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 6:21 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Anne-Lise. Many thanks, as always.