John Hamilton Poet Alliteration

Promiscuous Passions Pretense

Promiscuous passions pretense

Promiscuous passion puts on a pretense
as he pridefully tries to prove his physical prowess

Promiscuous passion presumptuously pursues prey
by projecting his powerful persona on the perfect person

Promiscuous passions asks would you dance with me please
as he pours profusely personal admiration along with the drink

Promiscuous passion persistently says you are so beautiful
but it's only a pretense to persuade her to provide permission

Promiscuous passion promises perpetual devotion proclaiming 
permanence of passion as a possibility (but remember the pretense)

Promiscuous passions pretense provides positive proof so she falls for it
promptly providing privacy... so predictable.

Promiscuous passions pretense plan works perfectly mission complete so...
promiscuous passion promptly puts on his pants and parts ways permanently

Leaving the pitiful prey to ponder what happened and how to proceed with this perfectly predictable predicament.


John Derek Hamilton
April 09,2016

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Richard Lamoureux April 11, 2016 at 7:53 AM A tale as old as time told in a fresh way. John Hamilton June 24, 2016 at 1:36 PM Sorry Richard missed this one somehow, thanks for the visit!

Timothy Hicks April 10, 2016 at 1:14 PM Impressed with this poem on "P" ... all of the other 25 letters watch out ... lest John writes a poem on ya ;) A fun write here, intelligently written, with a message behind it all. Lots of gals falling for the same trap ... lots of guys lacking some class. John Hamilton June 24, 2016 at 1:35 PM Sorry I missed this somehow, thanks Timothy, hope all is well!

Tom Quigley April 10, 2016 at 6:19 AM Pefectly penned psychoanalytic peepshow! John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:32 AM Thanks Tom

Jan Allison April 10, 2016 at 2:34 AM The perpetrators should be permanently put in prison!:-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:31 AM That's a good one! Thanks Jan

Brian Davey April 10, 2016 at 1:00 AM Perfectly Put!!! John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:30 AM thanks Brian

Charlie Smith April 9, 2016 at 11:11 PM Aha! The old "P" word ploy eh? Works every time. Good job John, very good read. Thanks, Charlie John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:29 AM Thanks Charlie

Lenny Gazbowski April 9, 2016 at 10:00 PM A most enjoyable read. Thanks John. John Hamilton April 10, 2016 at 7:29 AM Thanks Lenny