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From my breaking point, i try to reframe All my thoughts seem to sway My heart hates what my mind became Every emotion in my body, i try to tame my mind says go, my heart says stay from my breaking point, i try to reframe For my mistakes, i take the blame maybe we'll be again some day my heart hates what my mind became I smile just to hide my shame For my wrongs to you, I will pay from my breaking point, i try to reframe I feel crooked with no aim alone again, tonight I'll lay my heart hates what my mind became Now harshly we play in loves game Disappearing fast like snow in may From my breaking point, i try to reframe My heart hates what my mind became

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Date: 9/11/2009 10:10:00 AM
Excellent Villanelle! So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/10/2009 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/9/2009 6:16:00 AM
Hi Rebecca Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry with us. Congrats on your feature write this week! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/8/2009 7:00:00 PM
Rebecca - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:24:00 PM
Rebecca, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Rebecca. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Rebecca Lynn on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read brilliant poetry like this. It's beautifully written and deeply insightful Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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