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down the aisle with dad and promised margaritas last petal unplucked
Not for the contest , but thanks for the inspiration. Inspred by the love me/love me not flower,and you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/1/2014 10:17:00 AM
A poem full of promises, nicely done.
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Date: 7/30/2014 8:35:00 PM
Let the drama commence Charma. I can feel the gravity and suspense of this momentous event. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/30/2014 6:43:00 PM
Possibly marriage? Maybe, maybe not:) I love HI- KOO-----=)
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Date: 7/30/2014 3:26:00 PM
A lovely and touching haiku, Charm; the last line...excellent! // paul
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Date: 7/30/2014 10:30:00 AM
Same old Charming Charmaine!!! Love ya, sweet lady... loving huggsies, Jack XOXOX
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Date: 7/30/2014 8:14:00 AM
Very nice picture you painted here, Charmaine. I liked that line, Last petal unplucked. beautiful..... Robert.
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Date: 7/29/2014 9:21:00 PM
Wow,you have piqued my interest with this marvelous write my friend! I surely loved reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/29/2014 8:26:00 PM
Very clever Charma...love it Tim
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:11:00 PM
Ha.. I love it Charms!
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