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Privileged Pilgrim

All Powerful Provider present in all places Potentate presiding our prayers and praises I'm a pilgrim privileged to be in Your presence Panting like a deer for Your pure precepts Profiting from Your priceless pearls of prudence Provisioned by Your proverbial pages of Scripture Preserved from pagan practices Predestined to be Your progeny Placed in Your perfect plan Partaker of Your precious promises Purified by Christ's pouring blood of persecution Preferred above praiseworthy people Performing priestly purposes Planted in the perennial picture of paradise Patiently preparing for Your Parousia 08.27.2020
Written for Beata Agustin's "Alliteration Regarding Relationship With God" contest

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Date: 9/29/2020 9:47:00 PM
Congrats! My divine nature shouts "Wow" to this poetic testimony of yours, echoing your vibrant and sweet relationship with the Lord. All your words give reverberating joy to the spirit; and I especially delight in your last line: "Patiently preparing for Your Parousia" since I do likewise. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 9/29/2020 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love your line, "Placed in Your perfect plan." So very true. Enjoy your day and win.................
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Date: 9/29/2020 10:32:00 AM
Powerful, poignant, praise fellow "privileged pilgrim" with beautiful references to the Psalms - 42 and 110. Congratulations on your first place placement!
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Date: 9/29/2020 8:13:00 AM
Wow Jo, very powerful penning. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 8/27/2020 10:58:00 AM
- Jo, this is beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2020 5:15:00 AM
Amazing how you wrote this alliteration, Jo..divine words...
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:45:00 AM
Too good, awesome. All P alliteration. I read it again and again. All the best for the contest Have a nice day. Warm regards, Rama
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