Privileged Pencil

Guided by the writer's hand
it skates across page after page,
in complete abandon, 
relishing the journey.

A short visit now and then 
to the cut of the blade,
its red-lacquered coat 
shredded to shavings.

Down to the nub, its eraser gone,
a last soft gasp,
a Frisbee fling into the trash.

Its life springs forth
each time a reader
walks through the pages.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 4, 2015 at 12:14 PM
very good...I personally use bics...but you captured the pens thought...
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January 4, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Thank you, Richard. I actually start with a pencil, but usually chuck it half-way through the poem to type and revise on the computer.
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November 15, 2014 at 9:18 AM
humm this one set my mind to spinning through many variations of life eternal in other matters,thanks. success you reached me :o)
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January 4, 2015 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate every comment from other poets. I am always glad to touch someone with a poem.
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November 14, 2014 at 4:44 PM
:) 7 , don't throw this one away
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November 15, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, for taking the time to visit, read, and comment. Much appreciated.
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November 14, 2014 at 4:38 PM
A truly lovely and interesting write.
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November 15, 2014 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Gry. Now, I am coming over to read your work.
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November 14, 2014 at 4:23 PM
beautifully portrayed Cona:-) hugs jan xxx
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November 14, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thank you, Jan. I once wrote an essay entitled "Fifty Years to the First Sale." The nice thing about poetry soup, is that you don't get any rejection slips.
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November 14, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Very wonderfully penned Cona! Enjoyed it my dear friend. :) love and light! xxxxx D
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November 14, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Thank you, Dorian. I kept trying to get something published in ByLines Magazine, but it never happened. The trick seems to be, never give up.
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