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With quiet reservations he admires Attuned to all that senses captivate To sift thru information he acquires Considering how it may thus relate He studies all with intimate precision For his or any sake that might arise Unless the fates intend on a collision Leave supervision to HIS private eyes. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "What's In A Name" Poetry Contest, Juliet Ligon, Judge & Sponsor. * Congratulations on your first contest - this was fun! *

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Date: 2/1/2020 10:46:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/1/2020 6:49:00 AM
well penned, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:38:00 PM
That's very kind, Line ... thank you! :o)
Date: 1/30/2020 11:10:00 PM
Love this compelling piece, Gregory, and the picture you have included along with it. Together, they make a mighty team... Congratulations on your win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:38:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, HT, I so appreciate the kindness, my friend. Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/30/2020 2:42:00 PM
Back with congratulations
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve! :o)
Date: 1/29/2020 10:46:00 PM
This flows seamlessly and I love that you kept on theme throughout. Congrats on your top placement in my contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:37:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Juliet, I'm very pleased that you found my poem worthy of placement! (And now I know what my name means, ha!) Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Date: 1/28/2020 10:42:00 PM
wow.. Cool piece.. Congrats on your win..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenish - blessings! :o)
Date: 1/28/2020 10:39:00 PM
Written with such cool precision, and that ending so very cool and clever. Congrats, maestro, on your top-drawer win in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:36:00 PM
Blessings and thanks to you for the kind comments, Gershon - so appreciated, friend! :o)
Date: 1/25/2020 5:05:00 AM
This is such a well crafted and creative write Gregory, good luck in the contest, although I doubt you need it, for I foresee a win! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:34:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Jennifer, I'm very pleased that you liked it, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3
Date: 1/24/2020 3:04:00 PM
Nicely done, Greg, good luck in the contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/1/2020 10:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve! :o) <3

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