Private Eye


You hate your job,
but you're good at what you do

A paid shadow
who follows the trail of indiscretions
that other people lead you to

You're a gumshoe,
sticking to the assignment given you

Like a bloodhound on the scent,
another philanderer is going down
once you catch them in the act
Innuendo and suspicion becomes legal fact
And there's a bonus in it for you,
if you can get the aggrieved party the yacht too

Even still, you hate your job

It cost you a marriage,
and a normal family life
Walking the grimy streets,
back alleys and gutters
The underbelly of society is rife
with corruption and debauchery

This is what your private eyes see ...
so much dirt tracked back home to your family
It made your ex-wife not trust you 
as much as she should
Made your children lives sad 
from the taunts in the neighborhood

That's why you hate your job,
but you're so good at what you do

Everybody in high society wants to hire you,
opening up their blank checkbooks ...
with a couple more zeroes added too
 
You're a private eye,
living the Sam Spade life
Ain't nothing wrong with that,
being the good guy, wearing the black hat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/11/2017 9:09:00 AM
Another very well written dramatic verse my friend! Enjoyed your take on the Sam Spade gumshoe life~P & L~Che :)
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Date: 2/10/2017 10:45:00 PM
Great write, RW! I really enjoyed the way this one finished! Awesome ending! Great to see you again my friend!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 2/11/2017 8:18:00 AM
Ty, WW. Just feeling a little noir cinema that day. Love you, bro.
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