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Pristine poetic tears

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Among watching forbidden archangels saunter sullen paths I reflect mandragoras through evanescent gleams of orrery elegies, whirling into significant distraught dizain stanzas of my obsidian paint in halcyon hopes my expressive ekphrasis will bloom alongside aureate tulips. Under opal moons shading dozens of writhing languid lavenders of mauve, a hushing zephyr cuddles lost villanelle verses of my nocturne lilt heart shaping obsidian thorns of withering torment into eloquent paradelles gifting me picturesque promises of prospering ovary triumph over obsidian odes. O, how I dream vermillion serenade reveries of idyllic illusions whilst pouring out serpentine verses in poise patterns of bewitching ballads, perhaps yearning celestine fantasies to be painted in aureate ruby recognition are as asking one to grasp glazing pearl stars under an elixir eclipse. Upon scrolling night's interrogating introspective sighs of myrrh melodies I refocus labyrinthine lilacs of drizzling determination through ethereal epics, for it is through periwinkle poetry I've learned to set palindromes forward and through vignette vellichor musings I'll leap amethyst acrostics.
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Date: 12/31/2024 6:00:00 AM
Thick wirh imagery! My 1st read of your work and glad i came by. Wonderful to meet you! Must admit i had to get out my ddictionary through my 2nd read here.i’m off to red more of your work…….
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Date: 9/27/2024 4:20:00 PM
Deep thinking, Peonies....truly. " as asking one to grasp glazing pearl stars under an elixir eclipse" what a metaphor. WIshing you and your beautiful muse the best!
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Date: 9/22/2024 9:25:00 AM
Peonie, so beautifully penned, I love your poem, a FAVp8n
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Date: 9/22/2024 12:20:00 PM
aaa tyy
Date: 9/22/2024 9:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your write. Have a blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 9/22/2024 5:51:00 AM
Dang! After reading this I'd swear you were inky's poetic twin. She especially uses the word "whilst" alot. In any case, every bit as talented in use of words descriptors. Have a great weekend mi
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Date: 9/22/2024 2:57:00 AM
I love amethyst acrostics and all your wonderful tools of further alliteration and creativity in use of a vast vocabulary! Wonderful work!
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Date: 9/21/2024 2:13:00 PM
I can visualize this poem because of the provided in dept details. The words or greatly group together making the imagery of the poem feel like it's something surreal. enjoyed reading, this great job!
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Date: 9/21/2024 2:05:00 PM
shaping obsidian thorns of withering torment into eloquent paradelles… to grasp glazing pearl stars under an elixir eclipse…Very nice!
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