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Pristine and Pure The winding road led to a chasm deep below a cliff that proudly shows the view... a silken, blue-green lake, lays like a gem of opulence embedded in the rim of tall, lush evergreens that now adorn the natural setting so pristine and pure. Within, the lovely birds exult their home with calls and songs that flow so tunefully, while hawks shriek out in tones of mockery, their impetus to find and capture prey. Upon this cliff I share in nature's joy; vicarious, my thrill of standing here. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Eight Word Challenge 8 Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 09/03/2018 Required Words Used: chasm silken opulence adorn exult mockery impetus vicarious

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Date: 9/6/2018 8:21:00 AM
A beautiful Natural poem, Sandra. Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Ralph, for your visit, supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 9/4/2018 8:48:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Sandra, this is just exquisite, and going in my favs - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Greg, for the visit and for your kind, supportive comments, and uplifting congratulations plus the fav and blessings, for which I am so grateful! Sandra :)
Date: 9/4/2018 12:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your fine win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 3:56:00 PM
Beautiful creative use of the words. Enjoyed reading. Congratulations and blessings. Sian.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sian, for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/3/2018 3:24:00 PM
Amazing imagery Sandra, one of the very best in my contest, congrats on a worthy winner!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/6/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you, John, it was a pleasure to write for your contest and I so much appreciate your nice comments and fine placement! Sandra :)
Date: 8/22/2018 10:38:00 PM
Beautifully woven, Sandra and yes, I want to go sit there. Good luck! Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, Viv, for the nice comment and best wishes for the contest. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Date: 8/22/2018 9:02:00 PM
Well written imagery, Sandra, luck in the contest.. and Thank you for all you're support.... Hugs
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for your always uplifting comments! Much appreciated for sure...and you are welcome! Hugs, Sandra :) :)
Date: 8/22/2018 7:38:00 PM
I have enjoyed dipping into your dream. Thanks for sharing Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie Dust! I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/22/2018 1:17:00 PM
Wonderful. I loved the image of the lake being a gem embedded into the countryside. (And a fitting image too)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/22/2018 7:16:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and supporting picture! Sandra :)
Date: 8/22/2018 12:40:00 PM
Beautifully constructed Sandra. What a wonderful scene you create with your words. Much luck in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/22/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris, for stopping by with your very supportive comment. Very much appreciated! Sandra :)

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