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Pristine and Pure

Pristine and Pure

The winding road led to a chasm deep
below a cliff that proudly shows the view...
a silken, blue-green lake, lays like a gem
of opulence embedded in the rim
of tall, lush evergreens that now adorn
the natural setting so pristine and pure.

Within, the lovely birds exult their home
with calls and songs that flow so tunefully,
while hawks shriek out in tones of mockery,
their impetus to find and capture prey.
Upon this cliff I share in nature's joy;
vicarious, my thrill of standing here.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Eight Word Challenge 8
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 09/03/2018

Required Words Used:
chasm  silken  opulence  adorn  
exult  mockery  impetus  vicarious
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Sergi Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:21 AM
A beautiful Natural poem, Sandra. Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thank you very much, Ralph, for your visit, supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated! Sandra
Barden Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Sandra, this is just exquisite, and going in my favs - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thank you so much, Greg, for the visit and for your kind, supportive comments, and uplifting congratulations plus the fav and blessings, for which I am so grateful! Sandra :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 12:34 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your fine win.
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal! Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Beautiful creative use of the words. Enjoyed reading. Congratulations and blessings. Sian.
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so very much, Sian, for your visit, lovely comment and congratulations! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Amazing imagery Sandra, one of the very best in my contest, congrats on a worthy winner!
Haight Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 8:54 PM
Thank you, John, it was a pleasure to write for your contest and I so much appreciate your nice comments and fine placement! Sandra :)
Wigley Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Beautifully woven, Sandra and yes, I want to go sit there. Good luck! Viv x
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Thank you, Viv, for the nice comment and best wishes for the contest. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Well written imagery, Sandra, luck in the contest.. and Thank you for all you're support.... Hugs
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, for your always uplifting comments! Much appreciated for sure...and you are welcome! Hugs, Sandra :) :)
Rose  Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:38 PM
I have enjoyed dipping into your dream. Thanks for sharing Sandra
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Pixie Dust! I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it! Hugs, Sandra
Rowe Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Wonderful. I loved the image of the lake being a gem embedded into the countryside. (And a fitting image too)
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem and supporting picture! Sandra :)
Green Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Beautifully constructed Sandra. What a wonderful scene you create with your words. Much luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Chris, for stopping by with your very supportive comment. Very much appreciated! Sandra :)
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