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Prisoner of the Pen With Bonus Stanza From Darren White

"Last letters fall off a lonely page, punished the pen sits silent, recovering from past strokes of sage." Bluebirds sing along with Springs triumphant return red and yellow tulip's splendor fall out in front of me my inquisitive mind inhales nature's fresh awakening as my pen stares off aimlessly to another place in time Write for me they plead, but my muse has gone to sleep hardened by yesterday's trials, I remain empty and weak these eyes reach out towards where the butterfly flutter but my heart floats away up into the recesses of the sky Calliope, Thalia, Polyhymnia, why do you sleep so far Euterpe, sing your siren song in my desperate deaf ear fingers frozen in time above ink wells slowly drying in starry skies eluding songs sing us a seductive melody Thanks Darren...hope this sparks your poetic fire

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Date: 5/4/2017 9:45:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. Afternoon Darren. And yes, the bluebirds will sing and the so called empty and weak will rotate. Marvelous poetry from two marvelous writers and men. Well done completely. Congratulations on the collaboration and execution.
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:12:00 AM
Neither one of you is wanting for poetic fire for the muse is with you always!:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/4/2017 7:21:00 AM
Wow Tim, this is awesome! Your poem can't help but inspire! 7 ; )
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Date: 5/3/2017 9:59:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, and a bonus verse!!!! :) Wonderful!
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Date: 5/3/2017 5:29:00 PM
Amazing write from two of my favorite poets!!! AMAZING JOB!!
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:21:00 PM
inspired poet
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Date: 5/3/2017 2:17:00 PM
Great compliments shared, very well done...
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Date: 5/3/2017 1:22:00 PM
That was well worth the return! Just as quickly as the muse disappears into the heavenly night, she shall return with more words of delight for both of you! (Not that either one of you need her help)
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Date: 5/3/2017 1:15:00 PM
This was great Tim, from the opening poetic quote to the ending with Darren's bonus stanza. The entire piece is amazing.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thanks Chris ...hope it helps
Date: 5/3/2017 1:13:00 PM
I love it that you added that stanza to your beautiful poem, thanks so much my friend :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 1:13:00 PM
That's what friends do...thanks for joining in.
Date: 5/3/2017 1:06:00 PM
HI Tim. I completely understand how yesterdays trials or todays can get in the way of writing. You did very well with this and I love it. Have a good afternoon.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Heidi...hope I sparked Darren's muse
Date: 5/3/2017 1:02:00 PM
Good write Tim!! I got a very clear image in my head. Amazing job!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thanks so much Elissa
Date: 5/3/2017 12:57:00 PM
Secretly I think she helped with this lovely write, Tim! It has "muse" written all over it, my friend! I really enjoyed this
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/3/2017 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Budgie...it was inspired by reading Darren's muse is hiding.

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