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Pyramid of Peace Poetry Contest

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Prisoner

Your fingers around my soul.
So, I was convicted innocently
Worn out, pallid and tired, brooding
in a mire of self-pity, blighted by uninspiring events
of the shallow life of an innocent convict.
Disenchanted, but I knew the culprit.
“I own your signature.”  I whispered.
I languished in a narrow prison cell, 
contemplating the day, I would leave 
that hollow incumbency of a dreary life.
 
Time out.  The grounds were empty. I was kept alone,
walking around in my languid manner, indifferent,
a psychotic self-imposed dementia.  

Time in, the grounds deserted,
back to the cell, they call my home,
staring vacantly into the desolate void,
waiting like a cat that hunts its prey,
crouching still as death to deliver death.

One day they'll open the outer shell
of my cocoon and send me out,
into a changed world.  Then, perhaps
I'll come alive and begin my quest.
I’ll deliver his famous gift to him.
“I’m a vampire rose.”  Deadly.
I’ll deliver the gift to the one 
who betrayed me and have my revenge.

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful  "Prisoner" write. Great Ending...  Have a blessed day with your win...............
Empress Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 12:07 AM
This is so deeply moving and just powerful how youv done storytelling and delivered a story that is very impactful soulfully! I felt the depth of this poem and couldnt help but read it over and over dear Victor! Your use of the prompts are brilliant! And i can only imagine how one in such similar situation would feel and I feel for them! Pleasure reading ~ thank you for sharing. Sending you light always ✨⭐🌙✨ Congratulations on your win
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 1:26 AM
Thank you for a wonderful reply. Light always. Victor
Edmonds  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:57 AM
You described the Prisoner picture well Victor. It would be awful to serve a sentence for something that one’s not guilty of, a living hell… Beryl
Daniel Avatar
July 16, 2026 at 10:26 PM
Very creative work, Victor, though ending negatively...
Sharma  Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 7:49 AM
Woaahhh this is so captivating, dear Victor! I absolutely love your storytelling style in this one and how you've blended those prompts, the way you have evokes emotions about being caged and prisoned till eternity and if only one had a chance! To change everything and beyond! The anguish is deeply heartfelt and moving.. especially "a psychotic self-imposed dementia." That's so poignant and thought provoking.. and those ending lines.. absolutely powerful..best wishes to you in the contest!
Jones Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:40 AM
Creative and engaging with use of multiple prompts. Inky will love this! Good luck in the contest!
Kiser Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 9:56 PM
Powerful lines, "Time out. The grounds were empty. I was kept alone, walking around in my languid manner, indifferent, a psychotic self-imposed dementia."
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 3:21 PM
well done, Victor...so captivating and evocative. best wishes with this contest entry.
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 2:34 AM
Well done on entering this contest; your poetry is strong and evocative. I adore that conclusion. This would be perfect for a vengeance film. Discovering the circumstances of the man's wrongful incarceration
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 1:59 AM
- A haunting and powerful poem, Victor - You did well for this contest... best wishes :) - Have a lovely new summer week :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2026 at 12:52 AM
Oh wow. I love that ending. I like revenge movies and this would make the a good one. Finding out how the guy got put in prison an innocent
Hind Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 10:55 PM
ugh very dreary... you did the painting justice
George Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:00 PM
To be convicted of a crime one hasn't committed is the greatest pain one can have. Great interpretation of the painting. Well done dear friend. You have proved you can lay your hands confidently on any poetic form.
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 8:55 PM
The pain of betrayal is well conveyed in this haunting poem, and sad picture. Reading this story, told in the first person, I felt empathy for the prisoner's plight. Good luck in the contest.
Terry Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 5:29 PM
The sadness and the desperation burn inside this poem. Excellent work.
Kendrick Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Whoa!! A surprise ending and very creative interior. I enjoyed reading your contest winner. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 11:00 AM
Quite an ending…what a dismal existence!
Cunningham Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 8:58 AM
Quite a dark verse Victor, one day you'll taste sweet revenge and be able to move on.Good luck in the contest. Tom
Rolland Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 8:25 AM
just touching images, i love specially the rose vampire, love is something no one can control, thanks poet Victor
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