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I breathe out; and inhaled your manly scent,
Your sensual  touch takes my breath away. 
In your loving embrace is time well spent,
Your lips brushed mine, a soft sigh had its say.

I heard you murmur, “ l love you, sweetheart. “
I whisper, “ ditto, in a breathy utter.
You kissed me; I gasp; next you hugged my heart
That moment my heart began to flutter.

Love had arrested me; I didn’t resist, 
Willingly went without any restraints.
You convinced me that true love does exist,
I'm serving a life sentence; no complaints. 

You are my friend, my lover, and my life,
It's a joy and honor being your wife.

04-27-2021 Contest:Writing Prompt - Breathe Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/29/2021 8:43:00 AM
Wow! A willing prisoner :)
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Date: 4/29/2021 4:35:00 AM
Simply awesome take on contest words. Refreshingly different and how beautifully you captured a moment. Amazing poetry friend. Reading this gave me much joy. God bless! Take care, Rama
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:23:00 PM
I love this Alexis. “ I'm serving a life sentence; no complaints.” Romantic and sensually divine! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2021 4:15:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Alexis and an excellent contender for the contest... Best wishes Belle :-)
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Date: 4/27/2021 1:50:00 PM
so beautiful and romantic Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:16:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much.I am not sure if it's what the sponsor is looking for, but this is where my muse took me. I appreciate you being the first souper to stop by and leave such a comment. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

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