Prison of Freedom

The world, a place dreamt perfect, orderly and friendly
Graced and paced, hospitable to both brave and cowardly
The timid forced turgid, the brave at times feeble and shake
At the forces from the four poles, leaving their lives at stake

The tell tale of the noble as the only capable to cope forces all
To quickly mutate into beings that can conquer and hell in stroll
You and I, apostles stemmed on great doctrine that constitutes
Making the world better and better, indorsing the ancient platitudes

We`re awed and perplexed by perspective of the world depending 
On the side that we fall, the pessimist or unrelenting
With every rise of the sun, a chance to choreography
And perfect authentic living, whether it ends in tidings or catastrophe

As the light dims every day, conscience deems us gutless or valiant
Therefore with every breathe, comes an effort for a man to prove gallant

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Date: 10/11/2022 4:21:00 PM
Well written, Herman. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. Bill
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Date: 10/11/2022 11:53:00 PM
Thanks Bill. Your words, an exhortation!
Date: 10/5/2022 7:35:00 AM
We choose sides. L
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Date: 10/11/2022 11:54:00 PM
Everyday. And we strive to live by our choices.
Date: 10/4/2022 2:18:00 PM
Intelligent! Well written! I liked it!
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Date: 10/11/2022 11:55:00 PM
Thanks Lynn. I too enjoy writing and it's kind to say you enjoy my work.
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