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Prison Earth

Prison Earth, where the levels hurt, Depending on your location, Deeper do do, Afghanistan worse, The prison’s of our creation. What is this place, in mouldering time, where I see it not at all, on the prison earth, right from my birth, a criminal oh so small. will ya trip n fall, on the bladder gall, at the abbatoir, dunno?!? Get anudder job, Be a bloody snob Shut yer gob yer hopeless so n so … Don Johnson 28-sep-11

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Date: 9/29/2011 11:44:00 PM
Congratulations in PD's contest, Don. Yes, in many ways earths is just like a prison!
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Date: 9/29/2011 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Don
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Date: 9/29/2011 12:02:00 PM
DON~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:08:00 PM
Health n happiness, peace be yours, elbow him in the ribs, if he snores... through teeth with gappiness, speaks no more:)
Date: 9/29/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congrats DON on another amazing win with more fantastic poetry luv..
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:10:00 PM
Sweet Linda-Marie, well done i see, you are to top the list, whilst dummies like me a virgin be, forever remain unkist....
Date: 9/29/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2011 10:03:00 PM
It is hard to keep my feet on the ground....since I was born to fly....
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Date: 9/28/2011 7:54:00 AM
Keep writing it Don. Don't stop writing it. Tony
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Date: 9/28/2011 6:59:00 AM
Interesting write..Afghanistan a place of killing an abbatoir?..Sad isn't it..Could this happen where I live or where you live?..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2011 10:54:00 PM
Whoooooo yes my man you have created a poem that blew my mind...from the illustrious words, perfect form, and a majestic subject! I thoroughly love it!!
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Date: 9/27/2011 8:13:00 PM
write on. namaste. ~N
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