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Prison Earth

Prison Earth, where the levels hurt, Depending on your location, Deeper do do, Afghanistan worse, The prison’s of our creation. What is this place, in mouldering time, where I see it not at all, on the prison earth, right from my birth, a criminal oh so small. will ya trip n fall, on the bladder gall, at the abbatoir, dunno?!? Get anudder job, Be a bloody snob Shut yer gob yer hopeless so n so … Don Johnson 28-sep-11
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Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Congratulations in PD's contest, Don. Yes, in many ways earths is just like a prison!
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Don
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September 29, 2011 at 12:02 PM
DON~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Health n happiness, peace be yours, elbow him in the ribs, if he snores... through teeth with gappiness, speaks no more:)
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Congrats DON on another amazing win with more fantastic poetry luv..
Johnson Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Sweet Linda-Marie, well done i see, you are to top the list, whilst dummies like me a virgin be, forever remain unkist....
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Don. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 10:03 PM
It is hard to keep my feet on the ground....since I was born to fly....
Lane Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Keep writing it Don. Don't stop writing it. Tony
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Interesting write..Afghanistan a place of killing an abbatoir?..Sad isn't it..Could this happen where I live or where you live?..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Sivey Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 10:54 PM
Whoooooo yes my man you have created a poem that blew my mind...from the illustrious words, perfect form, and a majestic subject! I thoroughly love it!!
Jones Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 8:13 PM
write on. namaste. ~N
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