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Prisms

Take Sunshine and a prism Or moonlight and falling tears To make colors start to bloom Hidden magic bent to make rainbows bloom
For Parise Pariku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/13/2011 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2011 4:40:00 AM
Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win in the contest of Rick.
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Date: 1/7/2011 3:07:00 AM
Unique job on this worthy poem, for an honored place, Barbara. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/6/2011 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest, Barb! Beautiful imagery painted here. Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/6/2011 8:00:00 PM
beautiful Magic.Many congratulations for this super success.
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:26:00 PM
Love this Barbara!! I would have placed this much higher....a winning poem!!!
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Date: 1/6/2011 3:28:00 PM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry ... enjoy another great success with luv..
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Date: 1/6/2011 1:47:00 PM
this is really pretty, Babara, I'd put it up by the top of my own favorites in this contest! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/6/2011 1:47:00 PM
oops, spelled your name wrong. I am wearing only one contact lense today. What a pain for seeing what I am typing!
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Date: 12/27/2010 8:42:00 PM
Prisms are fascinating the way they break up light into the visible spectrum. You have described them fancifully well in this presentation.
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Date: 12/19/2010 1:51:00 PM
Nice write on light energy releasing through prisms, Unique thought. Good luck, barbara
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Date: 12/19/2010 8:36:00 AM
Ah, the reflaction of bent light from the prism, Barbara! Perhaps this energy could be harnessed to power our world, just as it allegedly powered Atlantis? I love your Pariku, dear, and think it will do very well in Rick's contest. Wonderful images filled with energy, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn
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