Prisms

Take Sunshine and a prism Or moonlight and falling tears To make colors start to bloom Hidden magic bent to make rainbows bloom
For Parise Pariku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 4:40 AM
Congrats Barbara on your well deserved win in the contest of Rick.
Freeman Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 3:07 AM
Unique job on this worthy poem, for an honored place, Barbara. Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest, Barb! Beautiful imagery painted here. Love, Audrey
Mannan Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 8:00 PM
beautiful Magic.Many congratulations for this super success.
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Richards Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Love this Barbara!! I would have placed this much higher....a winning poem!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Congrats BG on your wonderful win in Rick's contest with this lovely entry ... enjoy another great success with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 1:47 PM
oops, spelled your name wrong. I am wearing only one contact lense today. What a pain for seeing what I am typing!
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January 6, 2011 at 1:47 PM
this is really pretty, Babara, I'd put it up by the top of my own favorites in this contest! Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Pettit Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Prisms are fascinating the way they break up light into the visible spectrum. You have described them fancifully well in this presentation.
Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Nice write on light energy releasing through prisms, Unique thought. Good luck, barbara
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December 19, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Ah, the reflaction of bent light from the prism, Barbara! Perhaps this energy could be harnessed to power our world, just as it allegedly powered Atlantis? I love your Pariku, dear, and think it will do very well in Rick's contest. Wonderful images filled with energy, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn
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