Priorities

She was wearing her pajamas,
while standing at the checkout stand.
There were pink curlers in her hair,
a box of twinkies in here hand.

A screaming child was on each arm,
two more crying brats in the cart.
One was pulling the fire alarm,
one was tearing boxes apart.

Half of the boxes were open,
cereal spilling on the floor.
The two kids just kept on screaming,
about how they needed some more.

Felt sorry when her total hit,
three seventy-eight and a dime.
‘Til she chose not to buy the meat,
kept the beer, cigarettes, and wine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 7:57 PM
We all have our favorite, but she's got a lot of problems with her choices, IMHO. Thanks for sharing your fun rhyme poem for us the enjoy, Jerru. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
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September 27, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Thanks Deb. Happy to give you a giggle.
M  Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 7:58 AM
We all prioritise differently…if it was chocolate, chips and donuts l would have left the meat behind also HaHa!! that made me smile Jerry! Debx
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