Princess of Castle Fraser

White steeds drew me closer
To my new home, sae very dear
The great stone castle came in view
The soldiers their brass horn blew
I stepped out all dressed in white
Ae bonnie princess of medium height
My dark eyes took the weaponry room
As I was led inside by my groom
He took me gently to the green chamber
Sae lovely, I still remember
The maids helped me settle down
Biding for the promised night in a shimmery gown
As evening advanced, my heart flutter’d
And nature spirits around me mutter’d
But alas the groom ne’er came
Black knights emerged in his name
Ae sword of silver touched my breast
Blood poured down over his vest
My lifeless body was dragged along
The stairs that were oh sae long
My soul watched in silent anguish
Ae vanishing dream that I wanted to cherish
They tried to wash away the bloodstains
Unaware, they would always remain
And today as I float amid these darkened halls
And sing my tunefu’ music thru the walls
Ae chilling breeze keeps me company
But my heart longs for a revenge on past villainy

Dedicated to my Highland friend, James Fraser
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 3:27 AM
A well conceived piece, finely written.
Devonshire Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:24 AM
What an eloquent tribute to James. A fabulous desription of his homeland and the castles that can be found there. Wish you could teach me how to write in Scottish lingo. Best wishes in the contest, Tahera! Love, Carolyn
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April 2, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Good luck if entered into the Scotland contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Wonderful breathtaking lines Tahera my friend.. a stupendous story and so nicely dedicated to James the Highlander ..he is a gem on P.S. and we all luv him so... good luck if this one is for any new contest..it is priceless luv..
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 1:14 PM
A haunting and beautiful piece, Tahera. You were haunted by the spirit of James!
Fraser Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 8:16 AM
What a lovely poem Tahera, I'm smiling BIG STYLE here. What a gesture to write in dedication to me. Have a wonderful weekend, and thank you again....:)xx
La France Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 7:45 AM
I sort of always see him on a white steed also, wonderful dedication~~
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April 2, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Very nice Poery... and a nice dedication to a fine Poet and friend...always Michael
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