Priming September's Fall

~September of remembrance to savor, after grueling August drought, 
~Ever so pleasing, such as enjoying just one rain spout.

~Priming is timing an equinox change, adjusting period format,
~Timing is crucial as squirrels scamper about storing their winter’s fat. 

~Enormous are the compose piles in back yards and the wilds, 
~Major rich habitat, create images of squirming earth worm smiles.
 
~But yes, four seasons for good reason change human attitude, 
~Enough  recycles, and change rearrange human habitude. 
~Remembering the equinox of fall, expressing to Creator some gratitude. 



In Honor of Carol Brown
And Contest: Fall is Just Around The Corner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 10:46 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : ) And thanks - loved your contest
Nicole Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 12:32 AM
Congrats, awsome job:)
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 3:51 PM
Just great John your verse has been improving with leaps and bounds..throughly enjoyable, congrad's light & love
Johnson Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations John on your win with this poem in praise of fall. Joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 8:52 AM
fall is honored with your write!! congrats in the contest win!!
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 1:39 AM
congrats on your win in the contest John with this great entry
Ramage Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 11:21 PM
A nice take on September. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 9:48 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,john
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Enjoyed..Sara
Puddifoot Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 5:08 PM
congrats on your 1st place win in the contest, a thoughtful and spiritual write...
Horne Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Many congrats to you, John : )
Macmillan Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Congrats on the win, John! Like your unique, thoughtful take on the contest. Cheers, Cyndi
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 1:04 PM
you are tops, moe… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
Williams Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 12:55 PM
hey john congrats on a great win, love it..David
Devonshire Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 12:54 PM
September's scenery is portrayed beautifully in your poem, John. Very nice work! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
Ramsdale Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
Sweetheart Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congrats Moses on first place win with this cool write for Fall luv..
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Moses. Love, Carol
Susan Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 1:36 PM
wow! i'm sure this will be on the winner's list. great descriptions, especially the squirrels, and awesome ending :)
Ramsdale Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 2:42 AM
John: Your awareness and understanding gained through experience or study is appreciated. Your creations have never been boring my friend. You have a talent. Love reading your works. CR
Culverhouse Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 6:04 PM
great work my friend....are you getting rain or clouds yets??
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:05 PM
great title too! glad I saw this before it scrolled off the list of poems for today!
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:05 PM
You described a lot about September in this one. Glad to see so many nice poems on a great month like this!
Brown Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Moses.
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