Price of Paradise

We don't talk about it
Since hands upon the clock have ceased to move
When minutes creep, on skittish feet
The walls grow small~

By blue degrees, she drowns slowly
Waiting on skies which never clear
While she cuts holes in paper souls
Calling pain by prettier names
She is not invisible
Although she is unseen~

Cloudy skies have beauty, too
Dappled in blue's infinite base
But all the sunlight is full of smoke
Frost tipped flowers of summers fled
Into the wind of oblivion 
Melancholy lullabies
Scattered like coins down wishing wells
Price of paradise
She lies and says that she is fine
When truth is too fearful to seek~

Here lies the grave of innocence
Guarding roses of agony
Too brief a heaven to reside
In vastness
We shall lie
Under a thousand eyes~

I am full
Of emptiness
The silence 
Of severed hope
Sinking to
The floor of futility
Under the toll
Of heaven's weight 

Distract my dark thoughts
New moon's amnesia
As the ground
Falls off my feet...

Her epitaph, an unsent letter~

It takes more sight
Than you would see
To love the soul
That belongs to me.

3/21/21

Fragments of Verse contest
Sponsor: John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Watt Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:18 PM
I also loved, "New moon's amnesia"
Watt Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Michelle, this was posted during the time when I wasn't keeping up at PS. So glad your 4 lines in the Liberum Divisa contest pointed me back here so I wouldn't miss this stunner. To me, these words are reminiscent of Green Anniversaries with the grasping for signs of hope in a near hopeless situation as your knight jousts an invisible foe. 'I am full / Of emptiness / The silence / Of severed hope' is so strikingly powerful, as are the 4 lines of your excerpt. Melancholy, poignant, and beautiful.
Lawrence Avatar
April 27, 2021 at 6:11 PM
Absolutely beautiful and so melancholy Michelle. A fav for me . I want to read and reread this. So many amazing lines. Here lies the grave of innocence Guarding roses of agony As she cuts holes in paper souls Calling pain by prettier names Congratulations! All the best, Susan :)
Hamilton Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 1:58 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read in a long while, an obvious winner so congrats on the write and the win! It's a fave for me also!
Faulkner Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:47 PM
I'm deeply touched by your encouraging words, it brings a light into a dark day, thank you so much, John~
Ligon Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 9:19 PM
Back with congratulations, and also faving this!
Faulkner Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 4:45 PM
That means a lot, thank you, Juliet (your poem is amazing too!)
Lawless Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 7:04 AM
WOW...a medley of metaphor and melancholy woven with the thread of sadness
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 5:47 PM
Thank you for your comment and placement in your contest, John, it is very appreciated~
Proxenos Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Michelle this is certainly very different and I would imagine needs a great deal of concentration to assimilate so I applaud your poetic talent my friend, I sense a deep sadness however within this write - your poems are always superbly crafted and creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:08 PM
This contest was more about editing skills, it wasn't easy until I found the theme, sadness, regret, to bring it together, thank you for commenting
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Don't quite have enough adjectives in my arsenal to adequately demonstrate my awe at this gem, Michelle: Stunning and Haunting immediately come to mind. A FAVE. Superb! Bravo, Gershon
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:07 PM
I am touched you think so highly of it, thank you very much, gw!
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Wow, that final verse is stunning, Michelle. Maybe we all call pain by "pretty names" to hide how we're really feeling. Beautiful poem!
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:02 PM
So appreciate it, thank you very much, Carolyn!
Leffanta Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM
The Price Is Right?
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Is it ever?
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 5:43 AM
This is awesome in every way. A stunning creation from your gifted pen, Michelle.
Seeker Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Outstanding! A clear winner, in my book!
Rose  Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 6:24 PM
THIS IS HAUNTLING BEAUTIFUL , IN EVERY WAY, I can feel the vulnerability of the individual in every word you pen. Thank you for sharing such a fine poem this evening Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:03 PM
I am so humbled and flattered by your generous compliment, thank you very much
Ligon Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Great job on compiling this together so congruently! (I know what a headache it can be.) This can be reread again and again as there is much to glean.
Y. Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:20 PM
WoW! Michelle, You have penned such a sad well written piece. I found it deep as well. I saw one masking their pain very well. I going to read this again, it has much depth to it. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. I'm adding this to my fave collection. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:05 PM
I am so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for commenting, Alexis~
Theraven Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:04 PM
Michelle, So tantalizingly sad, the price paid for paradise. 'Melancholy lullabies ~~ Scattered like coins down wishing wells ~~ Price of paradise'. Touched a soul, yes. Poetry doesn't have to come from someone or somewhere. But it's so much better when it does. -Richard
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Yes this comes from the blues in my soul, I think, thank you very much for your comment, Richard
Devonshire Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 4:03 PM
Wow, can't imagine pain being called by "prettier names," but some people do mask their unhappiness. Your message is delivered powerfully in the final verse. Not sure what the contest sponsor is looking for, but I was totally absorbed by your entry. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn
Faulkner Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 12:04 PM
I guess I meant some try to deny their pain by pretending it's something else, thank you for your introspective comment ~
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