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Preyless Night

preyless night... only the moon in spider's cobweb

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M.I.A .

Date: 3/11/2012 8:49:00 PM

deep thoughts on these words Kash... fascinate the mind..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2012 3:06:00 PM

Kash, stopping by to peep on my entries... thank you.. love it.. always, PD ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2012 11:41:00 PM

I love this, Kashinath. I think the first line is not "concrete" but I actually enjoy the kind that uses other kinds of imagery!! How's it going today?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2012 8:46:00 PM

delighted by the image here, kashi buddy... wow, a preyless night , then a spider... yes!.. where are you??..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 7:20:00 PM

You are very strong at these, Kash..Like how you juxto'd at the onset instead of in the middle...Remind's me of my all time fav book, Charolette's Web..not the movie, the book. ha ha. This is a great book for your son to read especially if he enjoys the imagination of Beverly Cleary. The spider wove masterpieces in her web and saved the pig's life! .....awww....I gave the story away!,,.....