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Preying On Prey

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                                                    Scary bug eye stare
                                           Determined stance awaits prey...
                                             Blood-red mouth, throat, gut


(Not for the contest but just came to me.)

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Lisa Jones

Date: 7/31/2010 5:29:00 PM

hey thanks for the encouragement I hate predators lol GOD BLESS

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/10/2010 2:15:00 PM

Hello Sarah, This reminds me of a Parktown Prawn The scariest bug you have ever seen i from South Africa where i grew up . Nice write and thank you or comments on my Poem. Cheers

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/10/2010 8:35:00 AM

Those carnivorous insects...or radically-insane foes...blood and guts...wild eyed. Okay, I get the picture. Big Smiles to you, Sara. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/9/2010 6:23:00 PM

I could picture an alien of some sort here ;) come to think of it they do look like aliens, don't you think? enjoyed this one as well, Sara! --nikko :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/9/2010 2:26:00 PM

enjoyed, kinda scary/gross

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2010 7:00:00 AM

A wonderful images

Canny Amah

Date: 7/7/2010 5:14:00 PM

... images bellow like a thousand echoes on this piece ... Sara,you're at it 'gain! Cheers! Canny

James Fraser

Date: 7/7/2010 2:47:00 PM

Scary but out there Haiku, kool one Sara. Regarding Ebony Curls, I seen it written down and thought, kool title - must write >> James

John Freeman

Date: 7/7/2010 1:23:00 PM

I is surely a nice one, Sara. Should have enter it. Smile, Agape, Moses

Adell Foster

Date: 7/7/2010 12:15:00 PM

Sounds like the mosquito has dared stike again... excellent imagery and form. It is indeed a pleasure to have read for you. Thank you for your lovely comments... Keep flowing :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2010 11:43:00 AM

Hey, I LOVE the descriptiveness of this one. And yeah, you are right. That LIST(not even a poem) took forever. Hence, FIRST And LAST of those things!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2010 10:56:00 AM

Wow! Sara, really something you got me on this one enjoyed,..p..d

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/7/2010 9:43:00 AM

Sara, you sound like me, afraid of some insects..well done Haiku. I read someone's comment that you're not well. Hope everything will be fine, my friend. God bless. Peace, love, Audrey