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Pretty Talker

I watch her lipstick mouth; it never stops its movement as she prattles on and on. And now another famous name she drops, her daddy’s latest client, known as John by only his close friends! She widely grins while spilling secrets all about that guy. I swear the Gossip Girls had fewer sins than Pretty Talker. How she loves to lie! I catch her telling half-truths all the time, yet all the kids are mesmerized by her. To me, her pretty mouth seems filled with grime each time I hear it spew a racial slur. She has a straw between white teeth. A Coke She’s sipping now. Oh, how I wish she’d choke! Written June 28, 2016 for the Pretty Talker Contest of Skatcenter>

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Date: 8/1/2016 10:37:00 AM
Interesting Poem, Louis.
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Date: 7/17/2016 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. ...Hum...an Angel with a crooked halo taking down the competition!? I like it. ...Fran
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Date: 7/16/2016 9:08:00 AM
Great to o see this one high on the list Andrea.;0)
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:30:00 AM
I can still see the image of "her lipstick mouth" spreading lies. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:41:00 PM
Haha,amusing talker!congrats Andrea!
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Date: 7/15/2016 11:26:00 AM
We have all met this person. In school, work, in the neighborhood, she is there !! Well done, Andrea!
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:53:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:35:00 AM
Remind me not to make you mad...Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:39:00 AM
I think I've met her Andrea lol great poem congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/15/2016 3:44:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you SO much for supporting my contest. It meant a lot to me. Stop by my latest blog "False Face Must Hide" and celebrate your win... WEEEEEEEE!!!!! SKAT
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Date: 7/3/2016 9:25:00 PM
Love it.....good luck
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Date: 7/3/2016 7:16:00 AM
Some will do anything to bring attention to themselves, that last line made me laugh. Such great detail about this Pretty Talker, enjoyed, well done!
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Date: 7/3/2016 4:35:00 AM
Great poem well written x
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Date: 7/3/2016 1:49:00 AM
Well, I did. Kinda - choked a bit on the last line because I was surprised and delighted you had that wish in you! You thoroughly entertained me with this dash of gossip splashed at one who gossips worse. Did I just make sense? Tired again on the street where I live, but loving your write ... CayCay
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Date: 7/2/2016 6:40:00 PM
Oh, my. This made me laugh especially with the last word.
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Date: 7/2/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hi Andrea: You induced a feeling of payback in your poem of scurrilous gossipers Well done! An Italian hug.
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Date: 7/2/2016 9:35:00 AM
I think we all have the pleasure of the connect with such the soul dear poet...??...I'd like to hear your recite with this write Andrea! Beautiful 4th to ya girlie...much love, james
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Date: 7/2/2016 12:30:00 AM
LOL, Andrea, exactly what I am looking for. SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2016 12:02:00 AM
Hi Andrea, with this poem you certainly deserve to win, unfortunately we all come across someone like this woman and sometimes how I wish they would choke, but unfortunately we put up with these people, take care.......Vera
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Date: 7/1/2016 12:46:00 PM
Sounds like our presidential race. No one can trust such mouths. Love, daver
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Date: 7/1/2016 9:37:00 AM
Ha ha, I like the imagery and humour of it.
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Date: 6/30/2016 8:42:00 PM
Excellent verse! Ugh, what a horrible character to have to endure!! i know some like her, unfortunately. There's never a dull moment on your page, Andrea! Amazing work. Always, Laura
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Date: 6/30/2016 8:08:00 PM
Sounds like an unpleasant person to me. I could picture this person because of your description. To your health! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/30/2016 4:40:00 PM
Andrea, Wonderful entry for the contest. I like your "lipstick mouth" beginning. and "filled with grime" AnnaLinda
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Date: 6/30/2016 1:18:00 PM
actually that's her career and life mission, lol... smooth, awesome read, andie... sent you mail.. huggs
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