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Pretty Talk

It started with such pretty words The words that took one's breath away They dripped too sweetly from his tongue That's how it all began The years, the months, the hours paved the road that led the heart astray... The moment when you took his hand, And instead of enfolding yours in his, He shook you free, and walked away You learned that he had feet of clay, But that was over yesterday… They told you he had feet of clay... A worshipped figment you adored. But strange effect…their scoffing words Had only made you love him more. They told you he had feet of clay, but pretty words led you astray You've learned his words were mere cliché's But that was over yesterday… I thought that clay a playful thing. That caring hands enhanced the view. But clay needs fire, or it will lean, or falls unseen, and turns into a crumpled heap of words untrue. They told you he had feet of clay, But that was over yesterday… Some stars leave holes when they are gone. The pretty songs he left behind, …play on and on…till day is done You felt the pain, a restless heart ….but given time you turned out fine….and then at last the sun had shined They told you he had feet of clay But that was over yesterday… Your view of clay…did not exist. If love is molded, planned or shaped, it isn't yours, it can't be mine. Such empty words….you must resist Will never stand the test of time They told you he had feet of clay, so be content with Auld Lang Syne It came, then left with pretty words You listen now, but you are cured........ and that began today…. _________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/16/2016 9:06:00 AM
I liked your use of the repeated refrain, it added to the effect. Congrats.
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:25:00 AM
Tough lessons sometimes take long to learn, but at least they are learned well. I could feel your words as they took shape, fabulous write. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:29:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/15/2016 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, one of your finest...
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:33:00 AM
I've never heard the term 'feet of clay before Carrie' and I love the impact of the repetition of the line throughout the poem:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/15/2016 3:42:00 AM
Hi Carrie, your entry was awesome and one of my top faves like Jan. I knew the poem was going to be good after I read the second line. I was not disappointed. Love it, Love it....... I love it SO Much..... SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2016 3:42:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you SO much for supporting my contest. It meant a lot to me. Stop by my latest blog "False Face Must Hide" and celebrate your win... WEEEEEEEE!!!!! SKAT
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Date: 2/15/2014 4:16:00 PM
a perfect entry for the contest. the truest poems are the best. and your heart and mind went into this one. we hope it was not from experience but the best come from that dark place. you captured it even if it is just imagination. i have a feeling that it's not. john
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Date: 2/14/2014 6:21:00 AM
Wonderful! I haven't heard the phrase 'feet of clay' in a long time. I love the ending...'be content with Auld Lang Syne'
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Date: 2/11/2014 5:44:00 PM
The man apparently did not live up to the woman's expectations. Good write which should do well in Vicky's contest.
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