Pretty Polly and Peter Pan

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Pretty Polly picked a pen and pinpointed Peter Pan,
Who pinpointed Peter Pan?Pretty Polly!
Peter pan picked a pink pen,and pinpointed Pretty Polly,
Who pin  pointed Pretty Polly?Peter pan!
Pretty Polly and Peter Pan picked a pink pinpointed pen.
The pink pinpointed pen penned Pretty Polly and pinpointed Peter Pan,
Who penned Pretty Polly and pinpointed Peter Pan?The pink pinpointed pen.



(Inspired by all my friends here,using their toungue twisting,for Debbie's 
contest)Mine is not for the contest,but tnks dear Debbie ,tnks for the fun of it:)


Charma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fringe Avatar
March 9, 2010 at 6:28 PM
Pats pust perfect!!! Peally. lol David B
Fraser Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 8:29 AM
Blimey, this is a toughie to get ones tongue around, good luck in the contest Charmaine >> James
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Now THAT's A tongue twister!!!
Peranteau Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 2:37 PM
Awesome Alliteration Charmaine...I had a bunch of fun with this poem !!!!! *smiles* Right (write) on ! james
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Very cute Charma... like u very cute indeed... at least let Debbie know u wrote this tongue twister even if not an entry.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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March 6, 2010 at 2:07 PM
tnks James,,for telling me its form,,I need to study the forms,,Im lazy at it,,tnks my good friend..Charma
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March 6, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Sorry my tounge is still all twisted good job. To bad your not gonna use in the contest... Had fun reading.
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