Pretty As a Hummingbird

The attention span of a hummingbird
She plays the part of the buffoon
With stale trite corny jokes
And mindless ramblings of a simpleton

She plays the lunatic
Filling my head with rubbish
Not a spark or inkling
That silence is meant to be
Appreciated and treasured

She spews out her platitudes
One after the other
Just mindless chatter
Shared indiscriminately

Unabashed and shamelessly
Endlessly going about
Littering perfect silences
But she is pretty        



AP: 2nd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 23, 2019 at 12:00 PM
I love the hummingbird... nice poem..
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 12:13 PM
Thanks, SO. Most appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Interesting poem, Line... I like it. God bless you, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Thanks, Gina, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Somadas Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 1:54 AM
Can you reveal the name of your Hummingbird? Anyway she is pretty.. So let her chatter..
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 7:38 AM
My lips are sealed. Thanks for your visit, Jenish.
Theraven Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 10:47 PM
Line, Love lucky hummingbirds buzzing to and fro the red flowers all the live long day. -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 12:28 AM
Indeed the real ones are always appreciated and welcome, Richard.
Salehi Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 7:07 PM
That's it! As long as she's pretty.
Salehi Avatar
November 7, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Indeed...
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 8:04 PM
That's what matters! LOL
Mcguire Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Interesting, I have a family member like this
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Don't we all?! LOL
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Oh I can relate big time Line this person reminds me of my sister who could never allow a few minutes of silence she just twitters on regardless and never shut up - my father was the same:-( hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 4:55 PM
Funny how much rubbish people can generate with their thoughts.
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