Pretty and Pert Sightseeing

Out sightseeing in an old town one day
Casually strolling passing many shops and sites
I suddenly passed a bar window
And what I saw gave me a thrill and I saw a great site
For there perched on a stool pretty and pert
Was the most gorgeous girl
With a very short skirt
That rode high
Giving me a lovely view of her stocking tops
Long legs and lovely thigh
She was talking to a guy
I casually walked back and forth
Past the window around half a dozen times
Just to make sure they were alright
Had a great day that day and saw a few sites
That stuck in my mind when I got home that night
But I could have kicked myself you see
Just my luck to see one lucky guy
I wished was me.



Peter Dome.Copyright.2015 May.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/27/2015 7:24:00 AM
I came across a prestigious list of the top 100 most published poets here and I am not surprise. Your quality indeed goes hand in hand with your quantity. I'll check one or two more of your works because this has given me a unique satisfaction. I give you a handshake of a definite 7!
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Date: 5/28/2015 12:04:00 PM
Hi Funom. so good to hear from you with you're kind words. I look forward to reading you'r poems soon. I'm thrilled you enjoy mine. Thank you so much. my very best wishes. Pete.
Date: 5/24/2015 8:43:00 AM
- A great poem .............. wishes and dreams ...... something must be done, Peter !!!! - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2015 11:41:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise. so good to hear from you. just felt I was missing out on the finer things in life. thank you so much. take good care. best wishes. Pete,
Date: 5/24/2015 3:48:00 AM
Hmmn...you started with a humor in the story but ended up with a bit of wistful plea... :-) Very good, Peter. A 7.
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Date: 5/24/2015 5:29:00 AM
Yes. but that's how I felt. it's not so much what I saw, it was more to do with the fact that I'm a lonely guy. please don't think that's all I see in a women it isn't infarct it's the last thing. I rather have a strong friendship and romance. Thank you. my best wishes. Pete.
Date: 5/24/2015 2:07:00 AM
Interesting as always, I enjoy reading our poem...lol...well penned Dome......Afolabi.
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Date: 5/24/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi. I really appreciate your kind words. glad you enjoy my work, Take good care. best wishes. Pete.
Date: 5/24/2015 12:05:00 AM
Peter, that was deep. Enjoyed:) Thank you for sharing your poem. Goodnight **SKAT**
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Date: 5/24/2015 5:32:00 AM
Yes thank you Skat. it wasn't so much what I saw. just seeing the couple togheer enjoying each others company made me feel being single. that I was missing out. not having a relationship. thank you. take care. Pete.
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